It Was One of Those Mornings

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It is not quite that springy here yet..Sara

Just an idea about a poem from two angles..I know that you will do much better..

Desiring to stay in bed right now
A morning nap would serve me fine
The whole night spent counting sheep
Just tossing to and fro
Dreams alluded ~gone
ZZ's unheard sound
Morning calls
Get up
Whoa!!!
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Dreams
Dancing
Hovering
Surrounding sleep
Pleasant dreams of love
Wonderful sleep, peaceful
Refreshed good to be alive
Spring is heard in the chirping birds
Out on the porch once again to thrive

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/13/2016 8:25:00 AM

How simply you have explained in beautiful poetry two contrasting scenes! I can relate... love this..A 7

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2016 11:06:00 AM

Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2016 12:44:00 PM

Glad that you enjoyed this one..Thanks for your presence at my page..Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/1/2016 5:59:00 PM

Wonderful photo! Nice poem too :) Spring is hear in the chirping birds

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2016 6:21:00 PM

We are having the birds sounding like the mating calls of spring..I am sure that they are already getting ready to rear some young..We have pollen also which is bad for me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara