It is not quite that springy here yet..Sara
Just an idea about a poem from two angles..I know that you will do much better..
Desiring to stay in bed right now A morning nap would serve me fine The whole night spent counting sheep Just tossing to and fro Dreams alluded ~gone ZZ's unheard sound Morning calls Get up Whoa!!! X X Dreams Dancing Hovering Surrounding sleep Pleasant dreams of love Wonderful sleep, peaceful Refreshed good to be alive Spring is heard in the chirping birds Out on the porch once again to thrive
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