Get Your Premium Membership

It Was January '68

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Franklin Price.


Lately, I've been looking back on my time in Cam Ranh Bay and Vietnam. I wrote the following to record my memories of that time and place in my life. It is a memory of brotherhood that I have found nowhwere else in my life. My plan is for multiple chapters to cover this year in my life. I hope it brings back mostly good memories of the times.

It was January '68 Chapter 1 - arrival by Franklin Price 2/13/2019 It was January '68 The place was Cam Ranh Bay The embattled country, Vietnam Home's half a world away Had not a clue what to expect As I left the freedom plane Return was one long year away Quite an adjustment for my brain The Air Force was my service branch Nav-Aids my specialty Was in since 1965 Pounding the ground was not to be Processing in was just a blur This place was new to me The sun was blinding off white sand That was everywhere to see Somehow got to the squadron To the place I'd lay my head To a hooch with canvas roof Where a cot would be my bed Of course no air conditioning Had to contend with tropic clime Was glad was raised in Florida Had no AC any time Soon found there were cold showers No hot water to be found A six seater for a ter No flushing toilets were around No hole, as with an outhouse, Half drums caught the downward bound When full, burned with jet fuel And spread the ashes on the ground 485th GEEIA was my squadron Could not wait for TDY Nothing to do when home at Cam Ranh But rake the sand and wonder why

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/13/2019 9:42:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem very much, Franklin. You wrapped it up very well with your closing line.
Login to Reply
Price Avatar
Franklin Price
Date: 2/13/2019 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and your appreciation of the last line. That's how it was.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry