It Was a Good Morning Until

It was a good morning until
kids outside threw big rocks into
our room, leaving glass neath the sill.
What hullaballoo we went through!

Auntie Em passed out with a yell.
Our uncle, who stood near his wife,
with his crutches - to the floor fell.
My cousin screamed, "Run for your life!"

He thought he was back in Iraq,
for PST syndrome he had.
Poor Grandpa he tried to attack.
I swear I saw blood. It was BAD!

Feb. 15, 2021
for Tania Kitchin's It Was A Good Morning Until.. Poetry Contest
12 lines total in rhyming stanzas abab
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Balasubramanian Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 11:08 AM
This is too good a poem. It flows beautifully despite the alternate rhyme pattern. Wish to write like this in perfection in future. Story seems so real. All the best for contest. Take care Rama
Kannan Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:43 AM
Funny and sad indeed... Great theme for the contest... Reads like a winner...
Daniel Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 12:18 AM
A clever write for the contest, Andrea, hope this was not true:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 2:13 PM
I feel pretty sure this will be on the winners list Andrea. A great poem for her contest. Have a great rest of the week. Blessings xxoo
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Wow!! That was a very bad morning. I enjoyed reading this one. It kept me on my toes. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:27 PM
This type of morning would ruin anyone's day, Andrea. I hope the children in your neighborhood aren't really throwing rocks at windows. Any loud noise can trigger PTSD. The third verse was my favorite. Best wishes for a big win in Tania's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Ball Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 5:06 AM
OOhoohoo! Sounds like an awful morning to me. Good one Andrea. God Bless, JB
Brul Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Oh what a "Kill JOy"..Nicely penned!!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:03 AM
Great mayhem. The rascal who threw the rocks should be made to pay. ~~
Krutsinger Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Wonderful missive, great contender for this contest.
Pandit Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 1:24 PM
It was a mini disaster, enough to ruin anybody's morning. Well penned, fun poem, Andrea.
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 1:07 PM
I found the poem witty but also found the ending sad Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Lol!Andrea, You’ve penned a funny and entertaining write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Andrea, you have penned a fun poem for the contest, it made me smile, best of luck _Constance
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