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It Was a Good Morning Until

Sound sleep, cozy bed, slow stretch, feeling great Perfect weather, gentle breeze, soft sunlight Table laid, with tasty food on my plate The morning so far, infusing delight At the traffic light, knock on my window A passerby gestured to my car wheel I got down seeing, much to my sorrow Flat tyre, dampening my joyful feel Fifteen minutes later, with a stiff back Spare wheel in place but my briefcase stolen A hapless victim of a theft attack As reflex response, my heart spewed poison 11-February-2021 (syllabic rhyme) Written for: it was a good morning until ... poetry contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 2/21/2021 9:25:00 AM
I'm sure you were waiting for the other shoe to drop! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/21/2021 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Sam! :)
Date: 2/21/2021 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. What a morning. Some days it does not pay to get out of bed. Have a blessed day...........................
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:55:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula! :)
Date: 2/21/2021 6:09:00 AM
Perfectly scribed - I like the syllabic rhyme scheme. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 2/21/2021 3:30:00 AM
Funny how the morning starts off then things just go from bad to worse, a should have stayed in bed day. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 2/21/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 2/20/2021 10:27:00 PM
Hi Seeker, You penned a good write for the contest theme. What a morning. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/21/2021 5:18:00 AM
Thanks Alexis!
Date: 2/20/2021 8:43:00 PM
Great write, Unseeking, finding a stolen suitcase. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2021 9:16:00 PM
Alas, the briefcase is gone! Happy you enjoyed, Eve!
Date: 2/20/2021 7:41:00 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest with this fun and wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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Date: 2/20/2021 9:15:00 PM
Thanks Constance!
Date: 2/20/2021 1:58:00 PM
This certainly is a case of a bad morning with a good poem. Well done, congrats!
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 2/20/2021 1:16:00 PM
What a bummer of a morning. Congratulations on your winning placement, Seeker.
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Jenna! :)
Date: 2/20/2021 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement with your clever and creative poem. That would be a very horrible morning!
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Tania! :)
Date: 2/11/2021 9:36:00 AM
Good write. This is a common incident in India. Hope it was fictional. Good night. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/11/2021 5:41:00 PM
True, a common enough ploy. Thankfully, fictional for me!

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