Notes About The Poem

A Cottonmouth is another name for a North American snake that is also referred to as a water moccasin. 

It Was a Cottonmouth

It was a cottonmouth they said.
I pictured a dentist pushing a bunch of cotton in my mouth.
After they had put my gums through torture.

“I hate cottonmouths” I said.
“I didn’t think you knew what they were,” my mother replied.
“You take me to one once a year, don’t you?” I wailed.

My mother’s friend gave my mother a strange look and rushed away.
It was years before I understood why.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Love the amalgamation of two thoughts here! I had a humorous dentist. All’s he’d have to do is open his mouth. So he tells me one woman called him, “can i take the cotton out of my mouth now?” He says, “Give it another five minutes...” LOL with tears...
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Oh yes, it is so true of dentists!
Messina Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 6:19 AM
LOL...this is too funny, Caren. Love this!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 9:09 PM
I know you have seen a cottonmouth in the wild then, right?
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