It Was

It was love that time around,
Or so I thought it was
It was you and me back then
Now it’s finally passed

It was believed to last forever
All our friends thought the same
Now all our ties have been severed
Traces destroyed, ourselves to blame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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La France Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Aleck, your poem is full of emotion, oh yes, I have felt the bittersweet sword of lost love also, well done. Constance
Solier Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:18 AM
thank you =)
Palmer Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 3:24 PM
sad write,but life has it ups and downs,we just have to learn to bounce back,welcome to the Soup,enjoy
Solier Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:19 AM
thank you =) I am indeed enjoying this site. Feels great to be a part of it!
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