Jenish Somadas Poet Free verse

It Visited Me At Last

It visited me at last,
The one which I loath to call on,
Even for my worst enemy,
Like a plantain stem fallen on its sword on bed.
Trembling,shivering,
Unable to walk,
unable to sit,
unable to think,
Unable to breath,
Oh! the tip of my tiny hair follicles,
crying song of pain,
sure, I will come back strong,
But can't vanish without a note,
Goodnight PS,
At least for a fortnight.

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David Smith February 6, 2022 at 12:20 PM Poem of note that shows determination and self belief of writer and example we should all follow on dealing with what life throws at us. Hope you have more poems waiting for right time to be born. Best regards David in NZ

Linda Alice Fowler January 1, 2021 at 8:39 AM Yikes! Glad you recovered so quickly Jenish. Blessings of health and happiness for the new year! Linda

Panagiota Romios August 29, 2020 at 5:58 AM Jenish, Hope you are better soon. I just got over being ill. It's not enjoyable. Bless you, Pangie xx Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:26 PM Thank you Panagiota.. I'm feeling better now.. Thank God, Corona didn't take me with it.. May be he is overloaded.. lol..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 28, 2020 at 10:30 PM A fine intrigue, the last laugh lines sensational ! Is this about pain or some unwelcome thing, maybe you can't tell. Kudos!........... ....... ......... Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:22 PM Thank you Zaynab..

V. Deepa August 25, 2020 at 6:14 AM Oh...I hope your well Jenish sir...? I sense you are undergoing some gnawing pain.. :-( Yes, please come back strong ..!! Sending you healing prayers.Take care. V. Deepa September 17, 2020 at 12:32 PM No mention sir..it's my pure concern. Glad that you recovered ..Take care. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:15 PM Thank you for your prayers.. Yes.. Covid hit me and now feeling better..

Gershon Wolf August 23, 2020 at 5:11 PM You should only feel better, Jenish, back to your normal self, very, very soon. Thanks for the notice. Take care and Keep the Faith, Gershon Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:12 PM Yes.. I'm feeling better now.. Covid hit me and was in bed for a week or so.. Thank GOD, escaped..

Jon Gutmacher August 23, 2020 at 1:26 PM you know, Jenish . . . I'm fascinated by this poem because while I really don't understand it on a conscious level, it hits me on a subconscious level -- and I do love it. regards -- your friend -- jon Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:09 PM Thank you Jon for your kind support..

Besma Riabi Dziri August 23, 2020 at 9:12 AM There are of visits that absorb energy and a great part of daily wonderful routines.. those tiny blessings from God as they are but when we are deprived of them we do realize that they are huge and vital.. but the poet in you does persist and wages his battle and spills so beautiful a poetry! Wishing you a great time and a soon victory! A great pleasure to read your wonderful work, Jenish.. Best regards and blessings. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 10:08 PM Thank you Besma for your kind support..