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Posie

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01- a- 8 syllables
02- b- 8 syllables
03- a- 8 syllables
04- b- 8 syllables
05- c- 4 syllables
06- c- 4 syllables

07- a- 8 syllables
08- b- 8 syllables
09- a- 8 syllables
10- b- 8 syllables
11- d- 4 syllables
12- d- 4 syllables

It Tastes Divine

Dad dug some clams when I was eight, to boil alive, to my chagrin I heaved, contemplating their fate. Oh, What the hell, just toss one in he scolded me, you can't beat free. Dad assured me it'd taste great but it looked like guts with no skin, and doubtful, I stared at my plate. Slurp it up, he said with a grin. Gritty with sand, it tasted bland. I made a face at my first taste, and my dad struggled not to laugh. I knew he didn't like to waste, so I gave him my other half. Please finish mine, it tastes divine. It left a bitter aftertaste and yet, I lied on my behalf, sounding insincere in my haste. It would have failed a polygraph if dad had one, but I was done. (Posie) 8/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Very charming, Emile. Your humor is so sweet. Written with finesse. Very much enjoyed.
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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