It Sucks

Human nature greed yearns and craves for more smiting peace and bliss contentment offers while selfishness rules… Feeding all wants beyond needs’ grant clamoring much then heart covets*… “I like that” “Yours, I’ll get.” Oh, such sucks! Lord, please forgive... me.
*Romans 7:7 What shall we say then? Is the law sin? God forbid. Nay, I had not known sin, but by the law: for I had not known lust, except the law had said, Thou shalt not covet. August 12, 2020 7th place, "It sucks" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann; judged on 8/22/2020. (Edited on August 24, 2020)
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Carber Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 10:35 AM
So true, Beata! Congrats....
Watt Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations on your dimished hexaverse win, Beata. You have written well about the vice of human greed. Grace and peace ~ John
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM
- ... yes, it sucks, Beata - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 7:50 AM
A awesome write, dear friend. Bless you
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