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Forces of the universe produce a wonderous array of spectacles afar. Monstrous planets rotating around just one lustrous inferno of a star. Myriads of illuminated stars are part of the yet unexplored distant space. Nature not to be outdone displays ecstasy in many an enchanted place. Magnificent mountain ranges protrude their snow-covered peaks on high. Burnt amber deserts, picturesque oases, palms growing lush defy the dry. Mighty oak trees in emerald, green fields flourishing a rainbow of blooms, Sweetest scent wafting over the lands brings a cascade of delicate perfumes. Forlorn, I am presented with an abyss a mere stark white expanse, a page. On which I am expected to create art to, enlighten captivate or enrage. It is a daunting task to pit my prowess against such powerful competition. I trust my muse is in perfection mode to tackle such a demanding rendition. To compete with Nature and the Universe, I strive to create a masterpiece. All the enlightened, poetic power flowing within me, my muse must release. A plain blank canvas provides a challenge, of what to do, be it near or far, The project at hand may be almost as difficult as lighting a candle from a star.

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Date: 2/26/2024 12:14:00 PM
A lovely collection of couplets that rhyme and flow so well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/26/2024 7:53:00 PM
Thanks S.O. appreciated. I did aim for it to be a lil more than just a collection of couplets. :)
Date: 2/21/2024 6:51:00 PM
Speaks Volumes this is a gem! I love how you put this together and explore even nature the universe and your muse! Brilliant work for the contest! Best wishes!
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:17:00 PM
Karen, could you please swap places with the judge ? Thanx so much lovely lady, I do appreciate your wonderful encouragement. A million thanks. Wen
Date: 2/19/2024 6:00:00 PM
Dear SV, Your poem eloquently conveys the breathtaking beauty of the cosmos and the complex function of creation. Every line exudes awe for nature, from the grand dance of planets to the delicate fragrance of blooming flowers. Nature's grandeur alongside a blank canvas represents the intricate process of artistic creation. As you explore the realm of creativity, you must harness your vast imagination to create a masterpiece that rivals the marvels of the universe.
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Date: 2/19/2024 6:48:00 PM
I am starting to think maybe this poem is pretty good ! Maybe.. Thanks for your gr8 comment Lasaad. your encouragement is appreciated.
Date: 2/19/2024 1:53:00 AM
My sweetest Wen, I’m back again! I wish you had the belief in yourself as we all do. Ha - now look …. Chris ( a good mate of mine) has gone above me and he’s also giving a fav. Hmm .. me thinks we all know a wonderful poem when we see one and now three genuine favs in a row like little birds sitting on a fence:) I’ve never achieved that. You are adorable and my comments are powerful because I think and feel your poems are wonderfully creative and powerful.
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Date: 2/19/2024 5:09:00 PM
I like the poem too Chris, and I adore your wonderful accolades but I am a realist, and it's average. However I respect your opinion. I do believe in myself, but only to the extent that its believable ! I am neither humble nor conceited . I do take pride in what I do, and I thank you for being such a staunch support for me. Your friendship is invaluable and truly priceless. I sense that we are very very similar. Wen
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Date: 2/19/2024 1:55:00 AM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I see a lot of beauty within your words. Gentle scolding over :) Now keep writing and believing and enthralling us my sweet friend. Hugs to you. Xx
Date: 2/19/2024 12:38:00 AM
I love this poem x and the image is stunning - perfectly matching the majesty and colour. The final line is a beauty. Very nice indeed (fav)
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Date: 2/19/2024 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Chris Appreciated. Cheers Wen
Date: 2/18/2024 11:36:00 PM
My dear Wen, this is written from your wonderful pen with such an air of artistic intelligence. It’s so creative with stunning imagery that you have so magnificently captured as the canvas also wants to capture and represent its wondrous beauty and the poetic heart too. Perfect rhyming from you, as always, as you are daunted and challenged to do justice to what the poet’s eye sees in abundance before them. I love the feel here of being an artist for that’s exactly what poets are.
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Date: 2/19/2024 12:37:00 AM
Christina Bowring, have you read your own poetry lately ? to give me such powerful compliments is crazy !! You are a far better poet than I. I am grateful for your beautiful encouraging words, honestly I am, but I am not worthy of it in so many ways. I am content with my vocabulary as it serves me well however compared to some poets on Soup, I am a fledgling. I race to a thesaurus just to understand some eloquent poems. They are quite over my head. I am still a novice and even at my age, I am still learning. I do take pride that my poems have a purpose. They are not frivolous words strung together in a hap hazard manner to see how many cumquats I can fit into a poem. You and Sara and even Sotto and a couple of others, have brought about additional effort that I put into my poems to try to live up to your praise. For that I truly thank you, but I am still a heck of a long way from being worthy of it. I hang no tags on myself. Thank you so very much Chris.
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Date: 2/18/2024 11:40:00 PM
You are one of the most creative artists on here and I’m still in awe of how you can wonderfully and so frequently create so many amazing pieces. I love this and the pondering of artist against nature and I’m with Sara with her comments - I’m faving too! Hugs to you and admiration xx

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