It Seems To Have Been Forever

it seems to have been forever
since i held your hand in mine
watched that smile race across
my thoughts are storms raging at sea
                       with no ear listening
i am alone upon the deck, wandering
lost in the stars above and you
the sea lies quiescent

somewhere you sleep now
lost in that vast realm of dream
copious as the stars above
am i still in your deepest thoughts
does it cause an arm to wander across
in that emptiness is there a longing 
we were not ships passing in the night
fools yes and i will leave it as such

perhaps now there is another
i am but a remembrance
surfacing in the days confusion
they say it is better to have loved, lost
but that is a game for philosophers
therein lies no comfort to a sailor
whose thoughts are storms raging at sea
                            with no ear listening
perhaps you also stare into the heavens
and wonder, such are thoughts
wandering the deck
whose fate is a raging sea
holding you only in moments
when you sleep
i no longer dream
the sea lies quiescent

   Phoenix   88   The Patient Stones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dibiasi Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 5:25 AM
Absolutely superb I love it.
Ray Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 8:19 AM
"the sea lies quiescent" is another example of the double entendre I so enjoy in writing....the joy of neology
Cantu Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 2:16 PM
I do enjoy each and every one of your Patient Stones.
Ray Avatar
June 30, 2022 at 11:56 AM
thank you Anne....aren't those speakers just the cats meow....love them...that book was never put on sale anywhere, you had to be a poet or an artist to receive one...somehow several showed up on Amazon....i still have no answers to why, who, or how...the Sesquipedalianism within was more than enough to deter
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