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It Reflects Our Firmament El

if its water element  
then its all a big event 
freely given its God sent 
 
  
mirroring our firmament,  
liquid matter can't be bent
cuz its fluid it wont rend,
if its water, element.  
 
 


Contest Name: Elemental 
Sponsor: Charles Messina 
July 8, 2021

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Chris Conn Date: 9/19/2021 4:54:00 AM liquid consciousness, matter bends my elbow straight, swimming in the stream, Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2021 12:21:00 PM Congratulations on your win. What a creative write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win............... Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 7/31/2021 6:36:00 AM I really lik this poem, Mystic Rose, but your rhyme pattern was off or it would have placed higher. Great poetry! Congratulations on your winning poem...Charlie Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2021 2:52:00 PM Thank you for my placement, glad you enjoyed it.

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/31/2021 4:47:00 AM I learn much from your varying styles. This too is written in a very unique manner. This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement! Login to Reply

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/8/2021 7:02:00 AM Every word of this poem is superb. Firmament,bent, rend... Great thoughts and rhymes. A top winner for me Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/8/2021 7:35:00 AM Thank you Rama, for your comment, blessings :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/7/2021 11:30:00 PM Cute poem. It arrives at port in a very elementary manner. Best for a win. Hugs. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/8/2021 7:34:00 AM Yes water is so essential to us, Victor,:)

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 7/7/2021 10:10:00 PM I like what you did with this element. it made for an enjoyable read....Delice Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/8/2021 7:34:00 AM Thank you Delice, all the best :)

Harry Horsman Date: 7/7/2021 10:05:00 PM Clever poetry, Vie. Like it. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/8/2021 7:34:00 AM Thank you Harry, keep well :)