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It Reflects Our Firmament El

if its water element then its all a big event freely given its God sent mirroring our firmament, liquid matter can't be bent cuz its fluid it wont rend, if its water, element. Contest Name: Elemental Sponsor: Charles Messina July 8, 2021

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Chris Con
Date: 9/19/2021 4:54:00 AM
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liquid consciousness, matter bends my elbow straight, swimming in the stream,
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2021 12:21:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. What a creative write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/31/2021 6:36:00 AM
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I really lik this poem, Mystic Rose, but your rhyme pattern was off or it would have placed higher. Great poetry! Congratulations on your winning poem...Charlie
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/31/2021 2:52:00 PM
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Thank you for my placement, glad you enjoyed it.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/31/2021 4:47:00 AM
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I learn much from your varying styles. This too is written in a very unique manner. This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/8/2021 7:02:00 AM
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Every word of this poem is superb. Firmament,bent, rend... Great thoughts and rhymes. A top winner for me
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/8/2021 7:35:00 AM
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Thank you Rama, for your comment, blessings :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/7/2021 11:30:00 PM
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Cute poem. It arrives at port in a very elementary manner. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/8/2021 7:34:00 AM
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Yes water is so essential to us, Victor,:)
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 7/7/2021 10:10:00 PM
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I like what you did with this element. it made for an enjoyable read....Delice
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/8/2021 7:34:00 AM
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Thank you Delice, all the best :)
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Harry Horsman
Date: 7/7/2021 10:05:00 PM
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Clever poetry, Vie. Like it.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/8/2021 7:34:00 AM
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Thank you Harry, keep well :)

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