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"It is what it is.

It is what it was.

I'll be what I will be."

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I walk this twisted path of life within a cloud of doom and death is my perpetual incessant companion we are never bathed in the glistening sun but in shadows and there are scars on the roadmap of my journey for I am lost in a sea of graves and engraved names why must I travel this dark road, yet, I also know it is what it is . . . sometimes, a thread of sun finds a way to my soul and I remember all the happiness and the promise the sweetness amid the dregs of my yesterdays O, so heavy are the growing chains of my grief and the padlock is rusted shut forevermore or is it ??? in the wind my hair is a flowing golden river and I have dreams of flowers and butterflies yet, when I wake the darkness and gloom is waiting and drapes over me like a black cloak of weeping a mask hides the broken heart within my sad eyes it is what it is . . . my soul is weather-stained with years and tears and I hold a pen dripping red blood from deep within yet, fluffy clouds sail across the azure blue sky and I hear the melody of a thousand birds calling me can I throw off this cloak of grief- yes, it is possible or is it ??? _______________________ November 24, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/it is what it was Copyright Protected, ID 11-1307-167-24 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, It is what it is..............or is it??? sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 22/12/20 First Place

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Date: 12/23/2020 4:41:00 AM
Congrats to you for this beauty. So glad it was number one! God B L E S S you with many more.
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Date: 12/23/2020 4:05:00 PM
Gina, thanks so much for the congrats and compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 11/24/2020 9:58:00 AM
Such a beautifully penned, appealing and balanced perspective of life, Constance!!
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:56:00 AM
Newton, thank you for the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 11/24/2020 9:33:00 AM
So deep, so touching. A beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:57:00 AM
Marilene, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance
Date: 11/24/2020 8:51:00 AM
I like the idea...I thought your last line would have been, "I'll be what I will be."...Well done
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:58:00 AM
Arturo, thanks for visiting, yes, I could have used that but I wanted it more balanced _Constance
Date: 11/24/2020 6:08:00 AM
Such a beauty for the contest and definitely a fave for me. It's simply enchanting, touches the depths of the soul with it's whispery caress of words. God bless you always dear Constance
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:59:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the wonderful compliment and the FAV _ Constance _

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