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It Is Snowing

and I press my palm against my heart . . . 
     I am holding in an awful ache and p a i n
            my soul is stone COLD and bleeding ice
                            snow is  f a l l i n g  and melting into tears
                      weeping mourners are fading away
     this LOVE will be forever and ever-  I   w h i s p e r
            then-  I place a  RED rose to my lips
                            and leave it  d y i n g  on your tomb 
                     inside me is this horrid emptiness
     like a dagger has been PLUNGED into my heart
            I cannot not fathom a life without you-  l o v e
                            snow is FALLING and melting into tears

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(Re-write from March 29, 2015, It Snowed That Day)

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Nusker Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 10:27 PM
This poem is a poignant beauty. I love it the way you expressed. Copngrats! A 7 & a fav.
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December 20, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Very beautiful verse your love was deep
Yvonne Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Sad but sublime all at the same time. Straight from the heart. A Fav.
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