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and I press my palm against my heart . . . I am holding in an awful ache and p a i n my soul is stone COLD and bleeding ice snow is f a l l i n g and melting into tears weeping mourners are fading away this LOVE will be forever and ever- I w h i s p e r then- I place a RED rose to my lips and leave it d y i n g on your tomb inside me is this horrid emptiness like a dagger has been PLUNGED into my heart I cannot not fathom a life without you- l o v e snow is FALLING and melting into tears ______________________ (Re-write from March 29, 2015, It Snowed That Day) Entered in the contest, 100 in a row,191 sponsor, PD Tenth Place

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Date: 12/20/2016 10:27:00 PM
This poem is a poignant beauty. I love it the way you expressed. Copngrats! A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 12/20/2016 3:35:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/1/2016 12:12:00 AM
Very beautiful verse your love was deep
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:21:00 PM
Sad but sublime all at the same time. Straight from the heart. A Fav.
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