It Is Not With These Eyes That I Have Loved You

My beloved It may be that I would never get the chance to look you in the eyes within this life But remember.. It is not with these eyes that I have loved you Nor with my kiss or with this skin I have loved you With my way of being without you With keep on being who we used to be and of who we would never become My beloved It is not with these eyes that I have loved you Nor with my kiss or with this skin I loved you in ways only you would understand Cause only you have loved me in the same way tthat I did Or maybe even more.
Missing you!
Inspired by Jan's and Cas' 'Miss you poems' and musing thoughts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 4:36 PM
Floating down memory lane....smiling : )
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:35 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a wonder day Charmaine.
Tacito Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:36 PM
Spectacularly deep & melancholic. Sigh, tremendous message.
Yvonne Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:33 PM
Love so many of the lines in this poem. A real gem.
Richards Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 1:21 PM
No one writes of love, in such a way as you! Beautiful and as delicate as a flower. :)
Sathasivam Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 4:06 AM
Excellent. Beautiful thoughts. Enjoyed. Tfs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Good morning Charmaine.
Bordner Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:15 PM
A romantic sadness...a soul dance that can only be known once in a lifetime Charma...this poem exemplifies why you are a Master Poetess...you communicate love, passion, and mystery naturally, beautifully. Your style, your soul inspires Charma...J.A.B.
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October 23, 2014 at 7:50 AM
When love is so deep and defies any description carnal abilities may provide then it enters the realm of true and divine love that only few have the chance to witness. It is this kind of love that I discern into your verses my dearest, Charmaine! A wonderful poem worthy of such love!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 3:47 PM
This piece flows with sweetness, i enjoyed reading it.
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 3:43 PM
This is very nice, Charma. Something only shared between two old lovers or friends. Wonderful way to be inspired by another's poetry!
Nance Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 1:56 PM
This is good, beautiful :) Hugsxx
Hicks Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 12:33 PM
... only you would understand<< love it! Far away and at the same time close at hand. A delightful and sincere piece of writing.
Goswami Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Beautiful thoughts. Best to you.
Bailey Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:00 AM
So beautiful Charmaine. An exceptional piece. Hugs "B"
Manassian Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Deep and sweet...full of longing. Wonderful write.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:08 PM
very beautifully painted charmaine sometimes friendship all by itself is powerful smiling dear friend excellent pen
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:54 PM
simply perfection Charmaine!!!! Darren and I have never met but we simply are incredibly amazing friends no more no less and I adore him. its into faves a 7 - wish it could be a 10!
Chircop Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:15 PM
You two below are an adorable pair..You make me smile..Thankyou for your lovely comments. B-). And am glad that Darren is healing Jan.Your poem was pure genuine friendship ..People wont talk dear B-)...Tim is a teaser B-)..Goodnight now B-)
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:02 PM
I've confessed to Darren - he won't mind lol:-)
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:59 PM
I'm below you :) people are going to talk...lol
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:52 PM
So full of love Charma...hugs Tim
Yvonne Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:31 PM
I can't let Tim have all the fun.
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:27 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:20 PM
:)
Chircop Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Im in between B-)
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:57 PM
I'm on top of you again Tim - people will talk lol ;-) Hugs Jan xx
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