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It Is Not With These Eyes That I Have Loved You

My beloved It may be that I would never get the chance to look you in the eyes within this life But remember.. It is not with these eyes that I have loved you Nor with my kiss or with this skin I have loved you With my way of being without you With keep on being who we used to be and of who we would never become My beloved It is not with these eyes that I have loved you Nor with my kiss or with this skin I loved you in ways only you would understand Cause only you have loved me in the same way tthat I did Or maybe even more.
Missing you!
Inspired by Jan's and Cas' 'Miss you poems' and musing thoughts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/27/2023 9:59:00 AM
"I loved you in ways only you would understand, cause only you have loved me in the same way..." these words resonate deeply. I could get lost in your poetry for hours
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2023 1:13:00 PM
Alas, love poetry is not my strong suit but one of these days I'll write you a head spinner
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thankyou Tom..and I in youRs
Date: 10/6/2015 4:36:00 PM
Floating down memory lane....smiling : )
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Date: 11/25/2014 8:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a wonder day Charmaine.
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:36:00 PM
Spectacularly deep & melancholic. Sigh, tremendous message.
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Date: 10/27/2014 8:33:00 PM
Love so many of the lines in this poem. A real gem.
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Date: 10/27/2014 1:21:00 PM
No one writes of love, in such a way as you! Beautiful and as delicate as a flower. :)
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Date: 10/27/2014 4:06:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful thoughts. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:29:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine.
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:15:00 PM
A romantic sadness...a soul dance that can only be known once in a lifetime Charma...this poem exemplifies why you are a Master Poetess...you communicate love, passion, and mystery naturally, beautifully. Your style, your soul inspires Charma...J.A.B.
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Date: 10/23/2014 7:50:00 AM
When love is so deep and defies any description carnal abilities may provide then it enters the realm of true and divine love that only few have the chance to witness. It is this kind of love that I discern into your verses my dearest, Charmaine! A wonderful poem worthy of such love!
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Date: 10/22/2014 3:47:00 PM
This piece flows with sweetness, i enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 10/22/2014 3:43:00 PM
This is very nice, Charma. Something only shared between two old lovers or friends. Wonderful way to be inspired by another's poetry!
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:56:00 PM
This is good, beautiful :) Hugsxx
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:33:00 PM
... only you would understand<< love it! Far away and at the same time close at hand. A delightful and sincere piece of writing.
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Date: 10/22/2014 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts. Best to you.
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Date: 10/22/2014 4:00:00 AM
So beautiful Charmaine. An exceptional piece. Hugs "B"
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Date: 10/21/2014 10:54:00 PM
Deep and sweet...full of longing. Wonderful write.
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Date: 10/21/2014 9:08:00 PM
very beautifully painted charmaine sometimes friendship all by itself is powerful smiling dear friend excellent pen
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Date: 10/21/2014 7:54:00 PM
simply perfection Charmaine!!!! Darren and I have never met but we simply are incredibly amazing friends no more no less and I adore him. its into faves a 7 - wish it could be a 10!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2014 8:15:00 PM
You two below are an adorable pair..You make me smile..Thankyou for your lovely comments. B-). And am glad that Darren is healing Jan.Your poem was pure genuine friendship ..People wont talk dear B-)...Tim is a teaser B-)..Goodnight now B-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/21/2014 8:02:00 PM
I've confessed to Darren - he won't mind lol:-)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/21/2014 7:59:00 PM
I'm below you :) people are going to talk...lol
Date: 10/21/2014 7:52:00 PM
So full of love Charma...hugs Tim
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/27/2014 8:31:00 PM
I can't let Tim have all the fun.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/21/2014 8:27:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/21/2014 8:20:00 PM
:)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2014 8:17:00 PM
Im in between B-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/21/2014 7:57:00 PM
I'm on top of you again Tim - people will talk lol ;-) Hugs Jan xx

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