It Is Finished

"It is finished", cried our Lord
As He hung upon the tree
In magnificent obedience
To His Father's firm decree.

He knew well that He was going
Toward that lonely hillside cave
As he rode with "Alleluias",
Men's deceitful souls to save.

How His brave heart must have broken
As He traveled forth to die
When the cries of adulation turned
To shouts of "Crucify".

I'd like to think I would have stayed there
With the sad and faithful few
Who were with Him through His ordeal
As the senseless anger grew.

I hope I would have brought Him water
As He moaned with dreadful thirst
And would have stayed to hold His mother
To protect her from the worst.

And I hope that unlike Peter
I'd be too loyal to deny
That I knew my loving Savior
Who for you and me would die.



Won first place
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Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Awesome, Joyce. A big congratulations to you. I have like at least FOUR contests' winners to try to see here FINALLY, but I dont' think I will get to them all!! They really need to slow things down here. haha. LUv, Andrea
Kelly Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Congrats , Joyce , on a truly inspired piece and well deserved ....
La France Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 5:58 AM
There are many beautiful lines in your poem, but I think the lines that break my heart the most are," how his brave heart must have broken" "when the cries of adulation turned" "to shouts of "crucify" It is so true of human nature to turn on a dime, to lift the dagger without a care. Your poem won in my contest, Faith, because it states what every Christian feels in their heart, would they? Have a wonderful day, dear heart
Haick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 10:32 PM
My congratulations, Joyce for your wonderful poem winning Ist Place in the contest! Great job! And thank you for your kind comments! Peace, Audrey
Foster Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Congratulations Joyce. well done...Margaret
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations for winning first place with your beautiful inspiring poem Joyce. A truly deserving win. Love, Connie
Strand Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Congrats on your success in Constance contest Joyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in The Rambling Poet’s “Faith” Mini-Poetry contest with these words of commitment. Your creativity has excelled. I see why you won. Your poem is most excellent. (Some pondering I wish to share. If Peter had been killed by "not denying", Christianity would not have spread... as easily, perhaps. He was the Rock. I think Christ knew and predicted Peter's weakness, to give us a wonderful example of His understanding and forgiveness.) Smiles, Dane Ann
Dufresne Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:47 AM
excellent heart felt meditation, Joyce. I'm happy you took first place with it. Robert
La France Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:08 AM
Congratulations on first place in my contest, Faith, with this beautiful poem.
Foster Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:00 PM
I am sure these are the sentiments of many today, you express it so well in this lovely work....well done...Margaret
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Very well written. We all hope we would have risen above the ignorance then. Keep writing.
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