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It Is Finished

"It is finished", cried our Lord As He hung upon the tree In magnificent obedience To His Father's firm decree. He knew well that He was going Toward that lonely hillside cave As he rode with "Alleluias", Men's deceitful souls to save. How His brave heart must have broken As He traveled forth to die When the cries of adulation turned To shouts of "Crucify". I'd like to think I would have stayed there With the sad and faithful few Who were with Him through His ordeal As the senseless anger grew. I hope I would have brought Him water As He moaned with dreadful thirst And would have stayed to hold His mother To protect her from the worst. And I hope that unlike Peter I'd be too loyal to deny That I knew my loving Savior Who for you and me would die. Won first place

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Date: 2/5/2010 7:33:00 AM
Awesome, Joyce. A big congratulations to you. I have like at least FOUR contests' winners to try to see here FINALLY, but I dont' think I will get to them all!! They really need to slow things down here. haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:56:00 AM
Congrats , Joyce , on a truly inspired piece and well deserved ....
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Date: 2/2/2010 5:58:00 AM
There are many beautiful lines in your poem, but I think the lines that break my heart the most are," how his brave heart must have broken" "when the cries of adulation turned" "to shouts of "crucify" It is so true of human nature to turn on a dime, to lift the dagger without a care. Your poem won in my contest, Faith, because it states what every Christian feels in their heart, would they? Have a wonderful day, dear heart
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:32:00 PM
My congratulations, Joyce for your wonderful poem winning Ist Place in the contest! Great job! And thank you for your kind comments! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce. well done...Margaret
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations for winning first place with your beautiful inspiring poem Joyce. A truly deserving win. Love, Connie
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:32:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Constance contest Joyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in The Rambling Poet’s “Faith” Mini-Poetry contest with these words of commitment. Your creativity has excelled. I see why you won. Your poem is most excellent. (Some pondering I wish to share. If Peter had been killed by "not denying", Christianity would not have spread... as easily, perhaps. He was the Rock. I think Christ knew and predicted Peter's weakness, to give us a wonderful example of His understanding and forgiveness.) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:47:00 AM
excellent heart felt meditation, Joyce. I'm happy you took first place with it. Robert
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:08:00 AM
Congratulations on first place in my contest, Faith, with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:00:00 PM
I am sure these are the sentiments of many today, you express it so well in this lovely work....well done...Margaret
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:42:00 PM
Very well written. We all hope we would have risen above the ignorance then. Keep writing.
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