It Hurts To Flail You

it hurts to flail you 


                                      
on a hill
stood her foot
eyes of chill
hairs of soot

my wicked witch
befalls all
with her *****
and booty call

i was one
to face her gall
and dungeon
of nightly enthrall

she bound me
to ropes
and ecstasy
pills to cope

two whites
does tricks
cure of night
pokes and pricks

my back
whip lashed
attacked
and gashed

the blood
spurted out
every thud
i re-shouted 

i cried
candle wax
that fried
wounds max

i cried
she kissed
i defied
her bliss

smitten 
more whips
and bitten
with clips

i re-cried
more candle wax
that fried
more wounds max

she eyes
her prize
between thighs
as it rise

i cringe
her rough
fringe
of slough

as she rode
the train
so bold
without refrain

on top
she sang
no stop
from bang

that night
wore on
crying sight
eyes are gone

mindless
of pain
and her bliss
and gain

duet again
she shouted
in vain
as i pouted

when done
hurt and defiled
i was stunned
at how wild

she became
under surface
flailing her game
with purpose



connie pachecho

2/9/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/9/2017 9:28:00 AM
Oh my Connie-LOVE this !! Such power with few words. AMAZING!! Easy A 7 !! xo
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