9th Place
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Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Together they braved the soaking rains For they were lost in lover’s lanes They could not bear to say goodbyes Lost in the storm of lover’s eyes Collaboration with Charles Messina
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