It Happened On a Rainy Night - a Collaboration With Charles Messina

Foggy mists engulfed the bright
When raindrops fell throughout the night
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark
When sweethearts kissed at Lover’s Park

The morning rose with glistening light
The rain dampened fire flamed its last firelight
Tender smiles opened eyes glowing as lovers do
As embers of passion lifted and flew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Sweet passion. So many good ones were in that contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Those lovely embers of passion! Nice collab!
Blodgett Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:51 PM
Thank you Kim for the nice comment. Lona
Bowring Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 11:04 AM
This is a gorgeous, romantic poem Lonna. Loved the last line,’ As embers of passion lifted and flew’. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
Blodgett Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Thank you Christina for your wonderful comment. Lonna
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