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Written on September 4, 2023

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It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Passions roused beneath a silent moon, Hanging onto skies where stars are strewn Rhythms of dreams ripe for the taking Trembling in the kisses, utterly earthshaking
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Chunn Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Powerful and romantic.....nicely done!
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Dear Gina, the beauty of your romantic imagery takes my breath away. "Rhythms of dreams ripe for the taking" - such excitement and passion! Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes, love and hugs my sweet friend.. ~Susan
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Silent moon, skies where stars are strewn. Your way with painting imagery is so stunning. And the way you phrase words too is profound. Moving and touching write as always. Well deserved win. Congratulations
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:02 AM
So romantic, Gina! Back with congratulations for your win! Hugs and blessings, sweet friend!
Kauffman Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Beautifully done, Gina! Tender, gentle - spoken with your unique, poetic voice. Best wishes for the contest, sweet friend. Blessings and a hug!
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 7:20 AM
So sweet and romantic Gina! GL and hugs. :)
Volumes Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Wow this is enticingly beautiful Gina. Well done BOL
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 4:03 PM
- Romantic poem, Gina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Wow, nice addition in collaborating poem contest.
Meadows Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 10:27 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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