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Written on September 4, 2023

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Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Passions roused beneath a silent moon, Hanging onto skies where stars are strewn Rhythms of dreams ripe for the taking Trembling in the kisses, utterly earthshaking

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Date: 9/9/2023 7:43:00 PM
Powerful and romantic.....nicely done!
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Date: 9/8/2023 5:33:00 PM
Dear Gina, the beauty of your romantic imagery takes my breath away. "Rhythms of dreams ripe for the taking" - such excitement and passion! Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes, love and hugs my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/8/2023 11:33:00 AM
Silent moon, skies where stars are strewn. Your way with painting imagery is so stunning. And the way you phrase words too is profound. Moving and touching write as always. Well deserved win. Congratulations
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Date: 9/8/2023 11:02:00 AM
So romantic, Gina! Back with congratulations for your win! Hugs and blessings, sweet friend!
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Date: 9/5/2023 10:57:00 AM
Beautifully done, Gina! Tender, gentle - spoken with your unique, poetic voice. Best wishes for the contest, sweet friend. Blessings and a hug!
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Date: 9/5/2023 7:20:00 AM
So sweet and romantic Gina! GL and hugs. :)
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Date: 9/4/2023 9:22:00 PM
Wow this is enticingly beautiful Gina. Well done BOL
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Date: 9/4/2023 4:03:00 PM
- Romantic poem, Gina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/4/2023 10:44:00 AM
Wow, nice addition in collaborating poem contest.
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Date: 9/4/2023 10:27:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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