It Happened On a Misty Morning Collaboration

Wettened by the mornings dew 
Closely spaced where rows of roses grew 
Footprints stained the cobblestone 
Where my love and I had walked, alone
—Charles Messina

Roses pink as my love’s lips
The remainder of the day predicts
Scented overtones of life
Blue moon will ask Claire to be my wife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 8:00 PM
This will make a beautiful companion stanza to Charlie's romantic lines. All the Best dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 3:45 AM
Your reply to Charles is fantastic. So romantic. Best for a win. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Thank you so much, Victor!
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Your visits to my page always offer an uplifting comment. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Sara! Your ahhh, did me good. Bless you!
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