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It Happened On a Misty Morning Collaboration

Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone —Charles Messina Roses pink as my love’s lips The remainder of the day predicts Scented overtones of life Blue moon will ask Claire to be my wife

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Valsa George

Date: 9/22/2023 8:00:00 PM

This will make a beautiful companion stanza to Charlie's romantic lines. All the Best dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 5:04:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2023 3:45:00 AM

Your reply to Charles is fantastic. So romantic. Best for a win. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2023 4:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Victor!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2023 10:52:00 AM

Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Your visits to my page always offer an uplifting comment. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! Your ahhh, did me good. Bless you!