It Happened On a Misty Morning

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Written on September 18, 2023

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Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone Breathless sun, full of grace, cascades Over the moments, in soaring shades Vibrant hues reviving growing yearnings, Kissing away darkness’ deepest burnings

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Christina Bowring

Date: 11/3/2023 12:15:00 AM

Such a gorgeous verse dear Gina that fits perfectly with Charlie’s. Many congratulations on your win. Breathtaking poetic four lines so beautifully expressed - that last line is divine! Hugs and smiles :):)

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/2/2023 8:35:00 AM

Dear Gina, your collaboration poem graces my heart's imagination with a cascade of beautiful imagery that feels rich, intimate and embracing. Feelings of love blooming in the dawn of a new day! An exquisite addition to Charlie's verse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/2/2023 7:36:00 AM

Superb write! Congrats on your win!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/2/2023 4:25:00 AM

Gina, your beautiful poem just hits home with me. I love this brilliant write. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my contest! Love & Hugs...Charlie

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/18/2023 1:18:00 AM

A beautiful verse Gina, so fitting for the collaboration… Belle

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/18/2023 12:31:00 AM

This is such a sumptuous and heartfelt take for the contest dear Gina, as always, your lines are carved with grace and beautiful flow "Breathless sun, full of grace, cascades" Love this so much! "Kissing away darkness' deepest burnings" So evocative and soothing.. Best of luck :)