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Written on September 18, 2023

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It Happened On a Misty Morning

Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone Breathless sun, full of grace, cascades Over the moments, in soaring shades Vibrant hues reviving growing yearnings, Kissing away darkness’ deepest burnings
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Bowring Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Such a gorgeous verse dear Gina that fits perfectly with Charlie’s. Many congratulations on your win. Breathtaking poetic four lines so beautifully expressed - that last line is divine! Hugs and smiles :):)
Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Dear Gina, your collaboration poem graces my heart's imagination with a cascade of beautiful imagery that feels rich, intimate and embracing. Feelings of love blooming in the dawn of a new day! An exquisite addition to Charlie's verse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs my sweet friend.. ~Susan
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Superb write! Congrats on your win!
Messina Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Gina, your beautiful poem just hits home with me. I love this brilliant write. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my contest! Love & Hugs...Charlie
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September 18, 2023 at 1:18 AM
A beautiful verse Gina, so fitting for the collaboration… Belle
Sharma  Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 12:31 AM
This is such a sumptuous and heartfelt take for the contest dear Gina, as always, your lines are carved with grace and beautiful flow "Breathless sun, full of grace, cascades" Love this so much! "Kissing away darkness' deepest burnings" So evocative and soothing.. Best of luck :)
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