Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Sonnet

Inspired: 2023 October 29

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Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

It Does Say That

Away from the noise of that traveled one,
and let them make time with that nature map.
It seems challenging yet in the long run,
if they target shortcuts, it'll be a snap!

As they prove their values moving forward,
achieving success emboldens the pace.
If wit's end be reached--they'll be a swear word!
A shadowing thought engages their face.

Something was baffling that stirred everyone,
as to why this trail remains well hidden,
then midst roars and thrashing an abrupt stall,
in the end, grasped that this trail's forbidden.

'Twas nature's trail, they bolted, left all unscathed,
refresh at noon, thankful, as they sunbathed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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October 29, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Your sonnet flows and rhymes so well..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Thank you, Silent One, for your visit and reflective sharing, Aloha, William
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Charming. Makes me recall hiking trails by a waterfall in the mountains two past July's ago. How well you describe this!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 8:37 AM
Thanks, Karen, for your accommodating sharing and visit, Aloha, William
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