It Does Say That
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Poetic Form: Sonnet
Inspired: 2023 October 29
Image: N/A
Away from the noise of that traveled one,
and let them make time with that nature map.
It seems challenging yet in the long run,
if they target shortcuts, it'll be a snap!
As they prove their values moving forward,
achieving success emboldens the pace.
If wit's end be reached--they'll be a swear word!
A shadowing thought engages their face.
Something was baffling that stirred everyone,
as to why this trail remains well hidden,
then midst roars and thrashing an abrupt stall,
in the end, grasped that this trail's forbidden.
'Twas nature's trail, they bolted, left all unscathed,
refresh at noon, thankful, as they sunbathed.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2023
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