It Counts

It counts it all counts the perfect chosen word   what is spoken and what is heard      interactions and reactions   the smiles of your eyes   the feelings felt inside   oh how they make me melt       I swam naked in your soul   drying off under a heated sun   creating moments understood   just like you knew I would       strolling off in the night's review   not leaving you behind   two lover's lost inside with dreams steadfast entwined       drifting with the glow of the moon   searching stars and all of you   caresses revealing all   true beauty, I'm left in awe
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Duet Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:03 PM
An awe inspiring write obviously dedicated to an awe inspiring lady. Really lovely, Tim.
Smith Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Lovely Tim...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:30 AM
You u are a lucky guy! You do romance with finess. Thanks for your visit Tim. Have a great weekend.
Michael Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Romantic to the core...All the best Tim
Vaso Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Will talk more after I finish dancing!!! LOL
Vaso Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 12:37 AM
Tim this is an a perfection, in fact I loved the line "I swam naked in your soul" I may wish to rent it! :)
Goff Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Perfect poem, Tim! such smooth cadence, expertly crafted, I swam gracefully thru your thoughts...jim
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 2:49 PM
- This "talking" romance, Tom - Beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:45 PM
This is what beauty is made of...these lines...these sentiments...Lovely
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June 8, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Awe. Aw, swoon. I'm speaking english I swear! xomo ;)
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:52 AM
And I am left in awe of your poem. Beautiful Tim! :)
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