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It Could Be Me

For her mistake I never see a disguise of blessing I heed not the voice of mercy My love was violent For her mistake Irrational and impatient. I thought she was done for No glimmer of hope Bottled and tight like a knotted rope she is so close, in anger I burnt I thought she was done for Her shame, I preached. I got the chance of change When I thought the same for me A light of reforming To cleanse my oozing hate odour I got the chance of change With the scent of adour.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/14/2013 2:28:00 AM
WOW....i enjoyed it very much.. well done for the Good work
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Date: 3/13/2013 9:42:00 PM
Cleansing that hate odour is a challenge to most thanks for the read.
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