It Came On Frigid Winds

~*~ Cautiously I tread down a path paved of nightmares Dark trees with gnarled branches Marked with loneliness Stained with loss Misery hangs in the air Despair trails down imaginary forest walls Walls from which cries for help seep Bottomless crevices of broken dreams Abraded emotions Poisoned souls Frightening images paralyze Petrified eternally, mentally, physically Sounds of crushed aspirations whisper like an evil cry Hopes and dreams turn to dust,desecrated Envy runs as thick as poison Eating away at logic Sensibility all but gone Drowning in abhorrent past Still haunting traversly hanging overhead No sign of depreciation in sight Decayed by wear and tear Frayed edges barely hanging on Shadows of raven colored streaks reach out Wanting to strip all promises Silent prayers to the heavens in protest and anguish Screams that resemble wounded animal Howls of suffering rise through frigid winds Plaguing anticipation as you echo into the night Heart beating wildly pounding like a fist Screaming through leaves Awaiting reply Answered by silence... Feeling your cold, dead eyes Following me, do I run? can I hide? Like a disease slowly it begins to decompose Rotting like wood aged over time Till its all but gone... ~*~
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Macmillan Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Just thought I'd stop by and say hello. It must be getting cold, there, now. Hope you are writing, creating... as long as your account is open, I'll drop by and say hi on occasion. So :) Hi.
Macmillan Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:52 AM
Tracie, you came to my mind this morning, it's been ages and I wondered how you are, if you are happy, have you found what you are looking for? Your presence is missed, your uniqueness. May that open heart of yours get its strength back. Wherever you are, may you receive the kindness, support and love that you have always so freely given. Hugs, Hon, stay you, always. If and when you can, let me know how you are.
Hyam Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 4:04 AM
beautiful Tracey. You have truely weaved my dreams into the Free Verse Form
Burns Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 7:48 AM
I am humbled by your mastery of the written word. I think I have just found my favorite poet.
Sister Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Nice job!
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem :-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Tracie luvxx
Guzzi Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Essence Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 5:49 AM
I really like this, great job and congratulations on your win!! :)
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 4:57 AM
I don't think you left anything out here. I feel like a blob of nothing after reading this. lol. Congrats on the win.
A   Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Tracie... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA
O'Leary Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Very nice dark write, dark images... Terry
Sivey Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Now this is one of your best writes Tracie, a very gloomy and dark write, I don't know that I can really compete against this incredible poem my friend! This is truly a wonderful poem of yours Tracie, I really loved reading this awesome poem! What a spectacular piece, very grand, Great Work!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:30 PM
hi there Tracie, this is fantastic girl love it xx
Merryman Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 8:41 AM
An excellent, descriptive write, Tracie! Definitely deep and dark. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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