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to what do i owe this pleasure the meeting of you on plains of different measure does the heart reach out to meet discernment of casual relation does the heart concern it does position condone it do inner feelings enthrone it are imaginations consumed by it does anticipation wait is not what seem so small yet so large that they speak why in my mind are the facts so weak when every signal to me says, seek an opportunity to speak so sweet to offer her a larger piece filled with time, affection and care dare to explore her narrow streets become the aggressor as it should be don't cheat yourself of fantasies that help along the way and when that magic moment arrives don't in the least act surprised just go with the flow and act as if you've always known

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Date: 4/24/2009 4:53:00 PM
Well JohnIII, It looks like you've got it. (Smiling here) I enjoyed this poem. Sometimes timidity keeps one from reaching out. And then, there's the social lines issue...which I totally ignore...I don't play games. Thanks for commenting on my poem "Silent Reading" I wrote it for some middle school children that had silent reading today. I substitute teach. Keep writing and reading... Thanks again, Dane.
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Date: 1/13/2009 7:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful write. It flows smoothly when read and takes you with it. It is like going on a little adventure with many possibilities and variations on what one may find in the end. Much depth lie within these beautifully penned words! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/8/2009 1:00:00 PM
I love this John, it is so alluring with so many possibilties. Laurie
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Date: 1/2/2009 8:55:00 AM
Hello John, thank you for your comment on Her Lover. I liked the stand up and be counted sort of way with this poem, the get in there and do "it" nature of beginings
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Date: 12/30/2008 5:06:00 PM
Seize the moment, indeed! This is lovely, John. Respectfully, Donna
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Date: 12/29/2008 8:42:00 AM
Happy Holidays John, You have definitely captured the IT factor within the lines of this lovely write. truly captivating imagery and flow. I thank you for sharing and for your lovely comments on "IF". God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:21:00 PM
hi John such an elegant write, filled with questions, longings, and surprise, loved it, I hope that you are well, I have not been on the site lately, take care john, D-nyce
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Date: 12/27/2008 10:55:00 AM
Wonderful write John. Your words reads with such beauty...thanks for your comments on my work. Chris.
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Date: 12/27/2008 7:55:00 AM
Sounds amazing John, something wonderful, this was a beautiful write. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/26/2008 5:09:00 PM
YES!! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 12/26/2008 4:15:00 PM
Sounds like the beginning of something wonderful, wonderfully questioned. Thank you for kind comments. Joyce
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Date: 12/26/2008 2:44:00 PM
great pen my friend
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Date: 12/26/2008 9:19:00 AM
Sounds like "it" may just very well be something wonderful. Good luck! Love, Shar
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