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Isolation Keeps

Along roads where mistral sweeps Loneliness within ambles on Every other step falling, keeps isolation While, happiness continues out of sync

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/27/2012 11:28:00 PM

Hmmm.. interesting - a nice free verse poem. The title really sets the concept of loneliness of the poem. Very powerful. I like! :) Always, Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/27/2012 11:28:00 PM

Oh, and late congrats on your win! :D

Dana Smith

Date: 2/11/2012 12:26:00 PM

mmm.. can certainly relate to this one.. putting this poem on favorites as well as you as a fav. poet... very nice....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Michael Smith. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/11/2011 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your big first place win. Love, Joyce

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/8/2011 8:46:00 PM

Very neat poem.. evocative! Congratulations.

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/8/2011 2:22:00 PM

Really lovely poem. Congratulations on your win. I would like to read more of your poems. Will enjoy an evening doing that soon. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2011 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2011 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Sayings Of Wisdom" contest Michael. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/8/2011 8:36:00 AM

Michael, Quite a back door approach, but effective out of sync. smile. Congratulations on a worthy first place entry. Thanks for your support of my contest! Agape, Moses

Judy Ball

Date: 8/8/2011 4:17:00 AM

Well done Michael. Congrats on your win. God Bless, JB

David Williams

Date: 8/8/2011 3:08:00 AM

hey Michael, congrats on your win, David

Bob Quigley

Date: 8/8/2011 12:18:00 AM

Congratulations Michael.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2011 12:03:00 AM

enlightened thoughts, michael.. sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/7/2011 10:53:00 PM

Congrats on you win Mike!!!!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/7/2011 10:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike. Nice going. Ralph

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 8/7/2011 9:59:00 PM

Michael, congrats on your first place win in this contest of words of wisdom..~Glenna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2011 9:33:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your first place win with these words of wisdom luv.. great piece..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 6:22:00 PM

Hi! Michael.. how are you.. nice free verse poem.. isolation is a sad way to live... and the hard thing is when one does not know the fall one can take... sure enjoyed... and yes the world will continue to go on... take care.. p.d.