Isolation Keeps

Along roads where mistral sweeps
Loneliness within ambles on
Every other step falling, keeps isolation
While, happiness continues out of sync
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 11:28 PM
Hmmm.. interesting - a nice free verse poem. The title really sets the concept of loneliness of the poem. Very powerful. I like! :) Always, Laura
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March 27, 2012 at 11:28 PM
Oh, and late congrats on your win! :D
Smith Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 12:26 PM
mmm.. can certainly relate to this one.. putting this poem on favorites as well as you as a fav. poet... very nice....
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Michael Smith. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on your big first place win. Love, Joyce
Jones Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Very neat poem.. evocative! Congratulations.
Ramage Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Really lovely poem. Congratulations on your win. I would like to read more of your poems. Will enjoy an evening doing that soon. Lee
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Michael
Brown Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Sayings Of Wisdom" contest Michael. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Michael, Quite a back door approach, but effective out of sync. smile. Congratulations on a worthy first place entry. Thanks for your support of my contest! Agape, Moses
Ball Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 4:17 AM
Well done Michael. Congrats on your win. God Bless, JB
Williams Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 3:08 AM
hey Michael, congrats on your win, David
Quigley Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 12:18 AM
Congratulations Michael.
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 12:03 AM
enlightened thoughts, michael.. sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!
Baity Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 10:53 PM
Congrats on you win Mike!!!!!
Taylor Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 10:39 PM
Congrats on your win, Mike. Nice going. Ralph
Poetess Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 9:59 PM
Michael, congrats on your first place win in this contest of words of wisdom..~Glenna
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 9:33 PM
Congrats Michael on your first place win with these words of wisdom luv.. great piece..
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April 21, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Hi! Michael.. how are you.. nice free verse poem.. isolation is a sad way to live... and the hard thing is when one does not know the fall one can take... sure enjoyed... and yes the world will continue to go on... take care.. p.d.
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