isobaric pleasure

caught in the same gale force winds
they eyed the storm drenched in tears
the epicenter had been an outpour 
of sadness rejection and unresolved fear
to weather inevitable flood gates of change

torrential delusions of anger denial and fear
shadowed by a solar eclipse of two lost souls
faced the same need for healing and love

all self-appointed weather men and women
family and friends surrounded them in scepsis
warnings unwanted advice and discouragement

can you not see the hurricane brewing they said
do not get involved but save your own skins
but they walked quietly to the next beach
drew a line in the sand and entered the tides
propelled by the moon passion desire togetherness

circumstances seemed apocalyptic and hopeless
yet faith made them swim out into the ocean
not to silence the wicked prophets of doom but
to bathe in salt water cleansing the mis-adventurous past 

despite all odds they floated happily on the surface
all they could see was adoration and the miracle of life
one with themselves and with each other in peace
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Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. so delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Sweetness in this touching poem Kai. Congratulations! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 3:17 AM
- Faith is strong when it has deep roots, Kai - An interesting poem :) - hugs
Neumann Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Indeed. Thank you. Kind wishes, Kai
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 4:58 AM
I enjoyed reading your post. Thank you for sharing it with us. There is the perfect person out there for everyone. We all match up somewhere. Sara K
Neumann Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 6:59 AM
Thank you. And I have certainly found that person, which is such a blessing. Kind wishes, Kai
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