Isn'T She Cute

barely legal yet she walks with a cats strut
                                    (meow)

barely legal yet she wears all that make-up
                             (yuck)
                             
barely legal yet she has already had sex
                           (wilingly)
 
barely legal and she's already a stripper
                                     (dollar dollar)

barely legal and she changed her name to candy
                                        (not cane)

barely legal and she already made a ***** movie
                                         (for free)

barely legal and she already had two abortions
                                      (at home)

barely legal and she lives out on her own
                                      (in the streets)

barely legal and she's already engaged
                            (to the game)

barely legal and she had breast implants
                                  (that were botched)

barely legal and her names on every wanted page
                               (not for hire)
barely legal and her minds so messed up
                            (on drugs)

barely legal to grown to grow up
                   (too young to vote)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Williams Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 7:25 AM
The vein of truth rampages through this poem... in fact the whole poem is a good hard slap in the face..... great work Brandy
Higgins Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Creative piece of writing Brandy..excellent work.
Kershaw Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Brandy, This makes me wish I could help her but until she asks for it no help will help, only prolong the agony. Used to be in law enforcement and saw these girls on a regular basis. Maybe one or two in ten wised up and made it out. Hope this girl does too. Love, Will
Fraser Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Brandy, this poems relates to many a " is'nt she cute " young girl worldwide, abused in many a way, nice write>>James
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