Islands In the Stream

turquoise, I’d rather be
then haphazard and choppy,
still

floaters show my age—
islands, a chain.

not far from Manhattan,
dropped in the valley—
estranged

from the Erie,
canal of my hearing
rearranged.

aloha,
doused in leis—
not all to my liking

but they tempered
my hide.

travelogue strides—
negativity
slides into the sea
precipitantly.

9/18/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:26 AM
I wish some negativity would slide into the sea around here. LOL..I am about tired of it. I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:48 AM
I know what ya mean!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Your island fantasies border on the fantastic!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Thank you so much!
Eslinger Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 8:20 PM
Kim, I completely liked reading this vast deep scene setting and I travelled into and through it.marvelous! Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thank you, Sally!
Y. Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 10:09 AM
WoW! Kim, You’ve composed a well-written write for the contest theme. When I first saw the contest, I thought of the song by Dolly Parton and Kenny Rodgers, but I found out the song lyrics aren’t what he’s looking for. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Wonderfully done, Kim. You see to have travelled a lot. As a cadet?
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 12:55 PM
At various times, for various reasons…
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