Island of Sylt

I smile and feel the wind massage my face
Then close my eyes to smell the fresh sea air
The seagull’s wings catch wind then float with grace
A day on Sylt can wash away all care.

I love to see the changing of your tide
Then feel your mud squeeze gently through each toe
You steal my breath your rippled surface wide
Now baring gifts of sea shells as you go.

When you return your rushing waters swirl 
And take back all your precious jewels too
I watch in wonder as your wavings curl
And I’m in awe just at the sight of you

Now lying on your sand I watch each cloud
They tell me stories changing forms for me
Today the Greek Gods sat there very proud
As if they wanted all the world to see

The sun has bent down low to take a drink
Now thirsty from his journey through the sky 
He dips his head in waters turning pink
Then quickly disappearing shuts his eye 

Oh, isle of Sylt your sandy beaches fair
Invite me to return and taste your shore
The salty waters where I’ll sit and stare
Oh, isle of Sylt I’m knocking at your door 

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
09.22.2014
Contest: Iambic Verse II
Giorgio A.V.
3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/24/2014 7:11:00 PM
This is beautiful! Thanks for telling me about it and for your visit.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 8:57:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Faye. I knew you would like this.
Date: 10/3/2014 6:37:00 PM
This is a truly beautiful poem, Brenda! I have never seen the ocean, but these words make me want to experience it even more. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 6:52:00 PM
Thanks so much Kelly.
Date: 9/30/2014 11:43:00 AM
I adored this the first time i read it Brenda! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2014 11:50:00 AM
My lighthouse poem has now got a first!!! Nette had a problem posting the winners oh i am so so happy:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/30/2014 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan. I'm glad to see you are doing so well. XOXO
Date: 9/30/2014 10:10:00 AM
Brenda, I loved your poem - such a wonderful example of iambic pentameter - great rhythm and rhyme - definitely a 7 for me! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/30/2014 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra. I am honoured.
Date: 9/30/2014 6:58:00 AM
Marvellous write. I can imagine the mud squeezing through my toes. Well done Brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/30/2014 11:46:00 AM
Sorry Margaret somehow your message went up to Alicia
Date: 9/30/2014 5:38:00 AM
Very brilliant and imagery, congrats on the win, Brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/30/2014 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Mehta
Date: 9/24/2014 12:57:00 AM
Thanks so much
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Date: 9/23/2014 11:46:00 PM
Wonderful...wonderful...I wish you good luck lin the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2014 7:28:00 PM
Excellent! I hope this rates high in the contest.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/23/2014 7:37:00 PM
Why thank you Maurice
Date: 9/23/2014 11:05:00 AM
Wonderful write Brenda! I find this form tougher to make up! Good luck dear!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/23/2014 1:46:00 PM
I was surprised how difficult it was. I really had to think on it.
Date: 9/22/2014 7:15:00 PM
Awesome write Brenda..: I especially like it when the sun takes the dip..:) beautiful imagery..:)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/22/2014 7:59:00 PM
Thanks Olive. Nice you came to visit.
Date: 9/22/2014 4:10:00 PM
This is beautiful Brenda...hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/22/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thank Tim and thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/22/2014 4:06:00 PM
A beautifully written poem with great imagery Brenda it sounds idyllic. Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/22/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
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