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Isaiah, 43:2- These Words Comfort Me


When thou passest through the waters, I will be with thee;
      and through the rivers, they shall not overflow thee:
when thou walkest through the fire, thee shall not burn;
           neither shall the flame kindle upon thee.  Isaiah 43:2.

I found this gospel verse in the hospital chapel one day,
      Just wandering the halls, weak but alive and pondering;
From my coma, dreams had come drifting, confusing me,
            But the message was clear, I still had things to do.

Sitting in the flickering candlelight of the silent chapel,
      I picked up the bible and opened it without any thought;
My eyes fell to," when thou passest through the waters,
            I will be with thee;" And my heart was filled with love.

At that moment I knew the LORD had been with me,
      He had protected me and that is the reason I survived;
This verse, Isaiah  43:2  is my favorite gospel verse,
            When I am feeling low, this is where I go for comfort.

It gave me such hope that I was never alone to struggle,
     No river would overflow me, no fire burn me, nor a flame;
Yes, I would survive this illness and I would go on to write,
          To write my dreams and dreams, until my last breath.

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December 28, 2015

Verse

For the contest, I Am Not Ashamed Of The Gospel
Sponsor, Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 3, 2016 at 3:24 AM
Broken, awesome win. LINDA
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January 30, 2016 at 3:36 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Broken..
La France Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Upma, thank you for the congrats and the awesome ...
Cwiak Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Exceptionally moving B W. Big 7 from me and Kudos for the win. I am glad that the Lord let you find His words so that you could continue to express your dreams to us.
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Dan, thank you so much for that lovely comment and the big 7, yes the Lord leads us to what we need....
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:58 PM
I'm glad to see this gem placed high. It truly was one of the best I had seen. Congratulations.
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations, appreciate !
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Broken, Congrats on your awesome win. --SKAT-
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Thanks
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January 27, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in this wonderful heart felt contest..Beautiful lady..*smiles* -luloo
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Luloo, thank you so much for the congratulations, the wonderful, the beautiful and the smiles too!
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January 27, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Thanks for sharing this miracle with us Broken Wings, you are very Blessed. Congratulating you on your win, love from Jean
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Jean, thanks for the congratulations and the love!
Onclaud Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:54 AM
you bring so much comfort, constance... beautifully written.. many congrats!.huggs
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:57 AM
nette, thanks so much for the compliment and the congrats, so appreciated !
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January 27, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Constance, congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Rob, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate !
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January 27, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Eve, thank you for the congratulations, so grateful ~
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January 27, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations on your win! You truly deserve it! :) -HANS
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Hans, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment !
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January 27, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Broken Wings, Congratulations. And no, as you say below, you shouldn't change a word of it.
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Steve, thanks for the congratulations, so appreciated and after I write a poem, I seldom change it, it becomes my treasure and especially this one, so meaningful to me ~
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January 27, 2016 at 3:31 AM
Constance, first of all congrats! =`) I feel you here, the words are definitely striking, with strength, a personal encounter which we all must share to anyone..=`) Lots of verses provides us blessed assurance so long as we keep our faith to Him and cling to Him.. =`) I can relate to your words.. Isaiah book is one of my faves, also poetic with the lines.. =`) very inspirational!~ OLive Eloisa =`)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Thank you to Constance... =`)
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Olive, thank you for this inspiring contest, I was so happy to share my favorite gospel verse, and I am very honored with my placement, The Gospel According To Isaiah is amazing to read, I recommend it highly, God guided me to it that day of need, of this I am convinced....
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January 27, 2016 at 3:12 AM
Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Susan, thanks so much for the congratulations ~
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January 10, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Constance, I think you did quite well with her theme. I am trying to figure out what she means to start the poem with the verse. I hope she means, just to put the quote as you did here. that is why I came to take a peek. I know you told me you had tried this one. You did great!!
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Andrea, well I am not sure I got it right, or anything, all I know is that I love this write of mine, and would not change a word of it for anyone, ever, it is my uplifting treasure forever now ~
Inman Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:24 AM
A very uplifting poem that seems to hold deep meaning for you.
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:26 AM
James, thanks for visiting and for that nice comment ~
Adams Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 9:21 AM
A well written truth, Broken Wings. There is comfort, strength, and hope to be found in the scriptures. I have favorite verses too, which bring me all that I need.
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Cona, thanks for visiting my poem and for that nice comment, appreciate ~
Cheema Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:10 AM
I bow down before you, my poetess! I am silenced by your words. Could you tell me of your ailing self, Constance? Love....
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Balveen, such a lovely comment, and so appreciated, and thanks for the love ~
Hamilton Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Beautiful quote from Isaiah, excellent poem of survival and hope. Should do well in contest, however not sure if they are strictly looking for Gospels which are Matthew Mark Luke and John in New Testament. Maybe good to check with Olive John
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:23 AM
John, thanks for the visit, well it is from The Gospel According To Isaiah, I will leave it as is, if she does not place me then it was Gods will ~
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