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What Is Time?

Is Time An Illusion

 
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us " Quote- by Gandolf ___________________ time- the process of my existence past to present, I am lost in memories time passes non-stop, endless and eternally is time an illusion ? an hour of minutes a day of hours, a year of days sometimes, I dwell in the past for hours and think with fear for my future struggling to stay in the present is time an illusion ? for I can step into the past so easily time to do this, time to do that I want to let go of time ... it is like a chain around my neck if I want to be free do I even need time can I just exist with no ticking clock is time an illusion ? I am getting older I can see that myself years are rushing past me, stop, stop, stop time takes away beauty in the mirror but it still dwells within ... sometimes, I am still a little girl sometimes, I am walking hand in hand with father sometimes, having tea with mom but that is wrong, wrong, wrong is time an illusion ? I am running and the clock is chasing me have not accomplished much really where did time go did it ever really matter in my existence I feel it slipping away ______________________ May 24, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/is time an illusion Copyright Protected, ID 05-1357-900-24 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Time sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 05/27/2021 Third Place
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Inman Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 8:01 PM
I share your feelings. Sometimes I feel as time has passed me by or I have wasted what little I have. Sometimes it passes too quickly as I feel my smile fading. Thoughtful write.
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September 4, 2022 at 10:21 PM
James, thank you so much for the visit and great comment, God Bless ~
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May 28, 2021 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What an amazing write. "Love It" and the picture. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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May 28, 2021 at 3:33 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, love _Constance
Daniel Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 6:16 AM
This is amazing, Constance, congratulations:)
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May 28, 2021 at 3:33 PM
Jo, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations, love _Constance
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:24 PM
Excellent, congratulations.
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May 28, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Terry, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate, peace _Constance
Swartz Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Wonderful write!! Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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May 28, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Evelyn, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, love _Constance
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May 27, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance!
La France Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the congrats, peace _Constance
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May 25, 2021 at 11:17 PM
Time and you Constance created the most breathtaking poetry, something you can really be proud of. Truly enjoy all you write. Time could be an illusion, but feel good about what you have done and what you still have to do! Hugs, Jennifer.
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May 26, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Jennifer, thanks for the great comment and compliment, love _Constance
Alex Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 12:33 AM
True. Beautiful.
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May 25, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the visit and compliment, peace _Constance
Babbit Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Nicely said, I think we are all running while on the journey seeking that final; destination.
La France Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 5:33 AM
DM. thank you for the compliment and comment, peace _Constance
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May 24, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Actually, Constance, I suspect "time" really is just an illusion. A manmade way of measuring our days. Think, in God's kingdom there is no such thing as time because everything is eternity. God has all the time there is! We only have a small portion of God's time. Okay, I'll stop sermonizing and philosophizing. Enjoyed your poem!
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May 25, 2021 at 5:36 AM
Milt, thanks for the visit and compliment and I liked you comment, especially the part that reads "in God's kingdom there is no such thing as time because everything is eternity" peace _Constance
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