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Is This Too Much To Ask

I'm usually quite upbeat in all my poems So why should is this one be any different Going to make an attempt to come down off my cloud And stop pretending everybody loves everybody I'm certainly aware of the ills of the world These constant flareups that have been happening Since the very dawn of civilization As a member of the human race I'm certainly not proud of our record Of constant conflict somewhere in this world They say us guys are very territorial If that's the case, we'll never be able to coexist With people of different colour, language and customs We are bound to clash It's quite natural to have differences But why do these differences have to lead to war Why can't we sit down as civilized people And solve our differences We humans are a combative bunch at the best of times But the average person on the street Doesn't want war, just wants to live their life in peace Provide for their family and go about their business All we want is to be happy “Is this too much to ask?”

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Date: 11/7/2023 3:07:00 PM
We live with angst…why oh why can’t we be at peace! Hugs ~ Kim
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/8/2023 8:20:00 AM
The only thing we can do live a personal life and don't watch the six o'clock news! Happy day dear Kim xxx
Date: 11/7/2023 7:50:00 AM
A very complex question, Can there ever be a world at peace? I think not! Jack take a peek at 2 poems I wrote on this very subject. Colors of War, and Answer the Cries.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2023 10:07:00 AM
Complex and unsolvable... why does man try? May be another heavenly body!
Date: 11/7/2023 7:41:00 AM
No, I don't think it's too much to ask. You're right the average person on the street doesn't want war or even unresolved conflict. Those who persist in conflict & war are in it for the power, the glory, the money. They're frightened, empty souls fill things that won't solve their unhappiness. Power begets power; greed begets greed. All that being said, I think war is uncivilized and evil. off my soap box now. Thanks for your words today, Jack. Enjoy your day, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2023 9:58:00 AM
"frightened empty souls" power, money, frightened, empty souls! You've hit it right on the head dear Sara xxx!
Date: 11/7/2023 7:41:00 AM
Totally agree, Jack. It's the extremes we go to that bothers me. Soup mail, my friend. Bill
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2023 10:02:00 AM
It's been the scourge of man since day one! Thankfully I have the friendship of Sara and you! xxx
Date: 11/7/2023 4:26:00 AM
it would seemso Jack,
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2023 4:53:00 AM
It would be great if that was all we needed but nooo.... I'd say GREEDY is a good wood word!!!

Book: Shattered Sighs