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Is This Real

I watched you lie there, so cold, and still, how could this happen, is this real. They said your heart stopped, no one knows why, it just happened, and then you died. People are talking, they seem to know, maybe they are repeating, what they have been told. I will miss your friendship, I will miss your voice, I will miss you saying, we all have a choice. Farewell my friend, your final journey is here, how could we have known, death was so near.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2015 10:37:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:57:00 AM
nice piece, flow is great. i like it! -Jenna
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Date: 11/30/2010 3:32:00 AM
A very poignant farewell to your friend,your words struck a familiar chord in my heart as that is how my father passed ~ Smiling and looking the picture of health and gone the next day.... Thank you for sharing the read. May you find peace. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/2/2010 7:14:00 PM
very nice peace here again my friend thank you for sharing duncan
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:44:00 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:43:00 AM
A sad but very revealing and truthful write. Terrific rhyme and flow to this read. Michael
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:44:00 PM
You have my strength and support for your loss. Having suffered a loss not long ago I feel I can feel some of your emotion in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:33:00 AM
I am so sorry for the loss or your dear friend Christy. My prayers and blessings are with you at this difficult time. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:35:00 PM
my condolences on your lost and a very good tribute to your friend, I lost a good friends in my teens and today I still think of him even though I seen and lost so many others since then, keep on writing on
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