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Is This a Grook Or Not? (Nothing)

How can something come out from nothing When nothing can come from nothing? So nothing isn’t nothing when it results into something, Because by then, it would’ve been something and not nothing, Since something must always result from another thing, but never from nothing. Because nothing is not anything and something is anything. Nothing can never be something and something can never be nothing. So what is this business of something coming from nothing? Nothing…because there exists no such thing. ** 2000-- ummm I'm still trying to grasp this grook, haha and my attempts at it are fizzling out so I'm going to be sneaky and just submit this, lol please bear with me I have NO idea if this old write of mine can even classify as a grook! Sorry Charles...will still try to come up with something though...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2010 5:49:00 PM

Nikko I came back to see this. Sorry, I still liked the other one better. That is just me though. No wonder I hate Grooks if this is what people think a grook should be. . This one is too wordy. It was ok, but I LOVE The other one. Just sorry (now that I know what I know about this whole thing)! LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2010 5:49:00 PM

PS and read what CL Thornton said at the bottom of these comments. I agree with THAT guy, Nikko. I am so sorry your other one could not be seen for the little gem that it was! And that goofy Chris here. hahahaha I say "To each his own!" I am gonna go and fav the OTHER ONE.

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/13/2010 9:54:00 PM

Something in your soup mail. It came from something.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/13/2010 8:49:00 AM

What ever it is, I love it. Good luck in the contest. There, I said something but know nothing. Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2010 12:14:00 AM

Nikko, I have no idea what a grook is but something is something. And if i ever wrote a grook i would most defineatly wonder my self.Enjoyed, good luck if it is,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2010 6:47:00 PM

nothing from nothing leaves nothing You gotta have something if ya wanna be with me. I am trying to remember the lyrics to that old song I think one of the Beatles sang it? I bet you are too young to ever have even heard it! well, this is SOMETHING out of nothing?? hahaha. Good luck, Nikko. A grook is a grook is a grook and by any other name is still a grook. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/12/2010 5:46:00 PM

I don't know if it's a grook, Nikko, but it's very funny in one way and very insightful if you look at it from a different perspective. Perhaps the irony does qualify it as a grook. Best wishes in the contest. I had fun with the grook form too, but my poem was just four lines. Love, Carolyn