Is This : " Love ? "

My Life : FOREVER
 My LOVE : ETERNAL
My Tears :  BLESSINGS
My LOVE : IMMORTAL
My Fears : RELINQUISHED
My HEART : YOURS

My Eyes : See YOU
My Ears : Hear YOU
My Lips : Taste YOU
My Hands : Caress YOU
My Breath : Inhales YOU
My HEART : YOURS

    ( CONTINUED )

Author’s Note :  This is a Birthday POEM
To “ LENORE ELLEN ( Adams ) JOHNSON “
           MY LOVE , FOREVER
              November 4 , 1951

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2010 9:11:00 AM

HG, I saw your comment and don't think you should ever try to change your writing style. I've tried that and feel like someone else wrote those poems. Please just stay true to yourself, my friend. That is how we produce our best work. It is the individuality in our work that defines us as writers. This two-parter is very good and you should enter it Constance's "new forms" contest and give it a name. Or you could submit an "end-line" poem; you and Dane Ann created that style! Love,Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2010 8:52:00 AM

Sorry HG my silent beau .. did not receive a soup mail from u luv.. try again.please..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2010 6:11:00 AM

Simply and beautifully written HG my silent beau.. u have captured each essence so superbly luv.. did u post your winning list as yet? u need to do the last step of your contest as u have chosen your placements.. if u need help soup mail me luv.. "Sweetheart" forever and always luv..

James Peranteau

Date: 11/7/2010 5:02:00 AM

This love is eternal dear poet ! Your hope is filled with faith I see ! great write Sir ! much love, james

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/7/2010 4:27:00 AM

this an exceptional write.great thoughts.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/6/2010 8:13:00 AM

'You may use whatever you want from my lines,never need to ask :)Have a great weekend!Celene

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/6/2010 6:54:00 AM

Such a sublime experience partaken makes every day a memorable anniversary . Beautiful, HG.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/6/2010 5:56:00 AM

Very emotional thoughts you have expressed as always on Birthday on Lenore, HG

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/6/2010 4:04:00 AM

You inspired me to write a senryu'Home of No Goodbyes'. .thankyou :)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/6/2010 2:03:00 AM

fifty nine years without seeing her,yet so in love. .truely immortal..love is. .when it is true love.There are people who live all those years searching and never finding that love,truely Tears-blessed!tmfs and now i need tishoos !