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The mind is an identifiable entity. It resembles the dull interior of a cavity. From the comfort of a mother's womb. In the icy depths of the tomb. Every idea has wings that lift it into the air. Up an incredibly small fuzzy flying stair. Sometimes it will fall off your nails. To thrive in a litter that draws veils. Even the best ideas start with a bang. And listen as Karan releases the clang.
Written: December 26, 2022

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Date: 12/29/2022 6:50:00 PM
From the cavity of the mind thoughts and ideas emerge. Some die out , but most of them have wings and fly up. Beautifully expressed dear friend .
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