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Is Some One There To LISTEN?

Angel's are for you and only you. i think you can have many angels. i don't know. But anyways.... if you don't like to go home beacuase of the drama going on between your parents? just go to your room and just...talk! talk to your angel.... If your in a bad situation, and your scared with no one to comfort you? There IS someone to comfort you right now... with an arm around your shoulder saying everything is gona be all right in you ear..... THERE IS ALWAYS SOME ONE WHO WILL LISTEN AND COMFORT YOU WHEN NO ONE ELSE CAN!!!!!! *comment if you have a thought or fav poem)* -Angel4eva23

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Date: 9/17/2010 4:51:00 PM
Okay, that WAS in form when I typed it, then it got all squished together. Looking forward to seeing more of your poetry. It's from the heart, and when others can get lost in your words and feel what they're reading...you've succeeded in letting others know what poetry is all about. Cheers, Alana
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Date: 9/17/2010 4:47:00 PM
First of all, I really like this piece. I have read a few of your poems and see a potential....however, I think this piece would be better in a different form. I personally, put my thoughts and feelings onto paper, then turn it all into poetry form. Also try to stay away from phrases like, "but anyways" ..... example: I have an angel for me and only me Do I have many? I don't know But, when times are bad I go to my room I talk.....talk to my angel
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:01:00 PM
I don't agree at all =) You're crazy if you talk to yourself.
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Date: 9/6/2010 6:00:00 PM
Angels come in strange forms sometimes. Keep believing. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:41:00 PM
You are so right with this and this is very inspirational. Great job on this one.
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