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Is Pam To Be a Mother Focker

Greg Focker was always an awkward man, only fiancée Pam could understand- Jack would be his in-law, and soon baby’s Pawpaw, retired CIA in all the land. The Focker’s housekeeper was Isabel, rumors Greg had an affair and didn’t tell- Had a spawn named Jorge, from Greg’s roll in the hay, in young puppy love dear Greg Focker fell! Suspicious Jack kept his eye on Greg’s life, since his daughter Pam would be his sweet wife- Don’t mess with government, they show no sentiment, he made Greg’s days full of torment and strife. Jack decides to give Greg ol’ truth serum, knowing sorry Greg really did fear him- Blurts out Pam is pregnant, that wasn’t his whole intent, but did angry Jack really hear him? Turns out Jorge wasn’t really Greg’s son, ends up marrying Pam, had lots of fun- Jack will always despise, but so soon realize, for his daughter Greg was the perfect one! Favorite Comedy Movie Poetry Contest I chose: "Meet the Fockers" syllable count: 10-10-6-6-10 howmanysyllables.com Sponsor: Alexis Y. March 2, 2018

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Date: 5/22/2018 11:22:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful cute write ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/21/2018 5:48:00 AM
Enjoyed! I think I have to see that again, I don't remember much. Congratulations on your win! :) xomo
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Date: 5/21/2018 4:27:00 AM
What a wonderful limerick written by an even more wonderful poet. Incredible, luloo! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2018 9:03:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your top win, Laura.
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Date: 5/20/2018 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura, great choice of film, exceptional cast of actors, brilliant limericks enjoyed. :))
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:41:00 PM
Fun limerick, Luloo! Congrats!
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:13:00 PM
love the word play with the title Luloo. Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this fun comedy movie limerick! Totally enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:39:00 PM
Lol! Laura, Great word play on the title. I enjoyed this movie. The banter between Ben Stiller and Robert De Niro was hilarious. But Barbarsa Streisand ,Dustin Hoffman and the rest of the cast held their own to. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2018 5:12:00 PM
OH my, I took a double take at your title. hahaha. GREAT title and synopsis of that movie. Of the ones on her list, It was also one of my favorites. But I have so many other favorite comedy movies. I do not know what to choose!!! Thanks for my win in your last contest. And have a super Saturday.
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Date: 3/4/2018 10:09:00 AM
lol I wasn't sure if I should use that title, but I did anyways :) You're welcome and thanks sweet lady :)-luloo
Date: 3/3/2018 9:22:00 AM
Luloo, the title of this poem really grabbed my attention... I enjoyed your humorous write. John
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Date: 3/4/2018 10:07:00 AM
thank you John :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2018 6:14:00 PM
Charming account. Well done, Laura.
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Date: 3/4/2018 10:07:00 AM
thank you sweet Line :)-luloo

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