Is It Plutonium Electron

Is it plutonium electron
at dewy dance
Aw most welcome

My vacant orbits vibrate
My solitary protons gyrate

Let there be fireworks of exchanging ions
Between the charged universes

Let's be in fusion glee

My vacant orbits crying while swirling
Come hit me with your potent electrons

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13 July, 2019
The Miniverse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 9:47 PM
A poem with pop! A fun read Probir, congratulations on your win :), xomo
Gupta Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:36 AM
Thank you for enjoying the fun, Maureen ...
Mcgee Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 9:38 AM
Oh, let's be in fusion glee. Congratulaions on creating some fusion for a podium win!
Gupta Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Thank you, Jeanne ...
Canerdy Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:13 AM
WOW, Probir! CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Gupta Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Janice ...
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:18 AM
Love where you took this one, Probir. Congrats on your podium finish.
Gupta Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Thank you, Line ... Glad that you liked it ...
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 8:39 PM
great creativity in this one, Probir
Gupta Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
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