James Fraser Poet Couplet

Is It Just Me

Sometimes I don't know, is it just me
Why am I standing, when I should be in the trees

Sometimes I don't know if it's right for doing wrong
It appears that I'm singing a totally different song

Sometimes like in my past, is it just me
Maybe I'd be happier, back amongst the leaves




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Robert Lindley August 8, 2015 at 8:21 PM Very deep look inside for it to be so short. A solid 7 from me my friend. Takes talent to pack that much in such a short poem! A7 James Fraser August 26, 2015 at 1:53 PM Many thanks Robert. Every so often such poems are born from me. I trust your feeling better my lovely friend, smiles always, James :) :)

Wilma Neels August 5, 2015 at 10:39 AM Quite an introspective write Mr. Inverness I love it ;) James Fraser August 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM Hiya Wilma, nice to see you here. Thank you always, hugs//James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 9:32 AM Huge James, intriguing lines but when read it carefully talks much sense..short but it speaks much!~Olive Eloisa :D James Fraser July 28, 2015 at 3:42 PM A little piece from the depths of me, glad you liked it Olive. Hugs aplenty little one//James~xxx

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2015 at 9:59 PM James, this is so amazing in its simplicity . One of your best. FAVE! James Fraser July 28, 2015 at 3:44 PM Hiya Andrea, humans and trees are sometimes all that I see. Happy Tuesday to you and yours//hugs//James :) :)

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2015 at 10:24 AM you sway with this one, prince!... a natural perceptive imprint of who you are!.. huggs James Fraser July 25, 2015 at 1:39 PM I'm just me Nette, and I love being me, but lately I've been changed, and I love the changes in me. Hugs always Princess//James xx

M. L. Kiser July 25, 2015 at 12:13 AM I love this couplet; it conjures memories of me and a favorite dog, at the park. Thanks for the memory. James Fraser July 25, 2015 at 1:26 PM Keep me smiling and we'll smile together MLK, hugs//James :)

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 6:27 PM James this has such deep and sad imagery my friend:-( the middle stanza really packs a punch:-( hugs Jan xx7 James Fraser July 25, 2015 at 1:03 PM Another dark write from the depths of my mind Jan. Kinda liked writing this. Many hugs girl for you, James xxx