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Is It Just Me

Sometimes I don't know, is it just me Why am I standing, when I should be in the trees Sometimes I don't know if it's right for doing wrong It appears that I'm singing a totally different song Sometimes like in my past, is it just me Maybe I'd be happier, back amongst the leaves .

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/8/2015 8:21:00 PM

Very deep look inside for it to be so short. A solid 7 from me my friend. Takes talent to pack that much in such a short poem! A7

James Fraser
Date: 8/26/2015 1:53:00 PM

Many thanks Robert. Every so often such poems are born from me. I trust your feeling better my lovely friend, smiles always, James :) :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/5/2015 10:39:00 AM

Quite an introspective write Mr. Inverness I love it ;)

James Fraser
Date: 8/6/2015 1:59:00 PM

Hiya Wilma, nice to see you here. Thank you always, hugs//James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 9:32:00 AM

Huge James, intriguing lines but when read it carefully talks much sense..short but it speaks much!~Olive Eloisa :D

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:42:00 PM

A little piece from the depths of me, glad you liked it Olive. Hugs aplenty little one//James~xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2015 9:59:00 PM

James, this is so amazing in its simplicity . One of your best. FAVE!

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:44:00 PM

Hiya Andrea, humans and trees are sometimes all that I see. Happy Tuesday to you and yours//hugs//James :) :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2015 10:24:00 AM

you sway with this one, prince!... a natural perceptive imprint of who you are!.. huggs

James Fraser
Date: 7/25/2015 1:39:00 PM

I'm just me Nette, and I love being me, but lately I've been changed, and I love the changes in me. Hugs always Princess//James xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/25/2015 12:13:00 AM

I love this couplet; it conjures memories of me and a favorite dog, at the park. Thanks for the memory.

James Fraser
Date: 7/25/2015 1:26:00 PM

Keep me smiling and we'll smile together MLK, hugs//James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 6:27:00 PM

James this has such deep and sad imagery my friend:-( the middle stanza really packs a punch:-( hugs Jan xx7

James Fraser
Date: 7/25/2015 1:03:00 PM

Another dark write from the depths of my mind Jan. Kinda liked writing this. Many hugs girl for you, James xxx