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Is It Just Me

I wish I could feel what she is feeling, If there is pain there too that she is concealing. I wonder if she cries both day and night And if she is blinded by darkness that shines so bright Does she play with loneliness? and his friend insanity too Has she found the same purpose, with a vision of clarity? That the unfairness of love would be a life time reality. I know I made a promise To keep her from harms way But the agreement to live without her Was life’s unfair choice that I have to pay Was I just a moment to her An experience in time And she being my endless love That will never be mine Alas, she greeted me the other day With a perky “Hi” But for me, nine months on I still have this feeling…I want to die Is it just me? or does she feel this way too She meant everything to me my beloved YOU…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 9:19:00 PM
Now I know just how sweet you are! Very emotional but no satisfaction. Write another one with a happy ending.
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:19:00 PM
Now I know just how sweet you are! Very emotional but no satisfaction. Write another one with a happy ending.
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:12:00 AM
Somehow these questions may never be answered but I am glad you are not holding them inside, you are actually putting them out there so that they don't stifle you.. enjoyed this Sidney, hope your weekend's been good, love Wilma
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:55:00 PM
your poetry is very well penned. I love the imagery to this masterpiece
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:47:00 AM
Awwww, homeboy. I'm hoping this to be a work of fiction. Strength to you, poet friend mine. Licia
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:59:00 AM
* wow * this amazing Sydney * as if perhaps both of your hearts * hold such a deep love for one another but * as if at the very time * there lie a divisions wall somehow which * built amid the mortar a * never meant to be * kind of like “Romeo & Juliet” * beautiful in the shades of bittersweet * love sarah
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