Irritating Bats

Outside my door, bats They fly all around my house Scaring away anyone That comes near my place Implanting fear in people The bats are surely a bane
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Bats are herbivorous since they eat mostly fruit. Bram Stoker gave them an undeserved bad reputation. Good sedoka for the Halloween season Russell.
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 8:38 PM
for real? You have bats? I only have seen a few up close. they sure are awful looking critters!!
Horne Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 3:06 PM
bats often fly over our garden, but I'm glad they're not in the house, lol. Love your sense of humour, Russell
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August 24, 2012 at 11:58 AM
when I was younger I would walk up and down the neighbor streets with my brothers and we would throw rocks into the woods right after dark.. It would make the bats come out.. Loved your poem!!.. Thanks for stopping by..have a fabulous day :) cory
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