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Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Emile’s set a poetry contest in which the poet omits one vowel It’s hard to write this exacting form yet I will not throw in the towel! So I’m tasked to write a poem I’ve got myself into the groove to try and write a brilliant ditty and hope the sponsor will approve I started a Shakespearian sonnet and I grappled with the rhyme My poem didn’t make any sense badly penned work is a crime! I threw away my first attempt now I’ve grasped my silver pen determined to enter the contest alas, I’m devoid of ideas again If I write of the spring season and lambs gamboling in the field With the mother ‘ewe’ watching them my missing vowel can be revealed! Hoping the poem can be removed from contest as U is not one of the permitted vowels 06/11/21
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Ligon Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Great job on this. Yours is so fluid and I love your word play with the "ewe"/u.
Proxenos Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 11:12 AM
This idea that you were inspired with Jan is not only exceptionally clever, but great fun and all this whilst trying to omit a vowel - stupendous! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Curtis Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Jan I don't know why I didn't see this earlier, a brilliant piece if I've ever seen one. This is the Winner with me. Big Hug!!!
Faulkner Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Wow, could not even begin to think how I could write something as witty and clever as this while omitting a certain vowel (not even in this comment!) best wishes for the contest~
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 7:11 PM
This is sensational, Jan -- contest or no contest. Postively Shakespearean in its sweep! Ewe da Brd! :) gw P.S. And I don't mean 'Bird!'
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Shakespeare leaves me cold especially sonnets lol:-( he would turn in his grave at my poop lol:-) hugs jan xx
Laurie Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 6:35 PM
Hello Jan … taking on this task is hard enough but U certainly did it better than I - well done Jan - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:32 PM
I am working on another one and am determined to get it right this time :-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 5:57 PM
Ewe R funny, my friend!
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:31 PM
thanks Kim, perhaps there will be another contest and i can enter it then:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 12:18 PM
oh are you saying that he only allowed a, e, and I to be removed? I recall noticing one vowel was not included. I wonder why. Jan, you did a REALLY cute job with this. I love the fun you have with challenges. Never lose your sparkle. And shoot me an email sometime!
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Yes only a e i o and i didnt read the fact U was missing:-( hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 7:15 PM
I love this, Jan... So adorable. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Thanks Regina:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 3:09 PM
A tinge of your bathroom humor, Jan....you always find a way. LOL Love it!
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Thanks jenna it has a way of slipping in lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 1:37 PM
ha! nicely done, jan, contest or not! i enjoyed...
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:29 PM
I'm not giving up and have nearly finished my second attempt!:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 11:21 AM
U did it! Brilliantly done, Jan! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:29 PM
would have been even better if I had read the rules lol:-) hugs jan xx
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Wonderful write typical Jan style. Not sure of Emile, but surely you can try Brain Strand contest, Am confident it will place. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it! :) Thanks
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Thats a good idea thanks Rama:-) hugs Jan xx
Agustin Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end, revealing your glad-filled poetic heart and skill. I keep smiling while reading this, and am still grinning. God bless you.
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Shame its a pity I didnt read the rules as U is not one of the chosen vowels for the contest, oh well back to the drawing board if the sponsor can mark my poem as ;unread' :-( hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Leave it to "ewe" Jan. As I read I was waiting for a "P-ewe" ending....
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 3:26 PM
lol Thanks John, I'm not sure if it is what Emile is after but i enjoyed the challenge:-) hugs jan xx
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