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Irresistible Delight

Irresistible Delight


            Crooked garden gate
            Two naughty children swinging
                   Run, mothers coming

childhoodsenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 14, 2012 at 7:46 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2012 at 4:22 PM

barbra, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD

James Fraser

July 2, 2009 at 4:02 PM

Lovely write to two impish children>>James

Kristin Reynolds

November 9, 2008 at 3:58 AM

HA! Yup, mama, the joykiller - that's me! lol great visual here, love Kristin

Deneen White

November 8, 2008 at 5:27 PM

kids can cause such mischief, a smile inspired of this write, take care D-ncye

Nigel Fawcett

November 8, 2008 at 3:28 PM

Irresistible indeed. I thought garden gates were made for children to swing on - I still swing on them now! Love, Nigel

Christopher Higgins

November 8, 2008 at 2:27 PM

I can see them swinging away having the time of there life. This is so well done. My mind drifted off to another place with this piece.

November 8, 2008 at 10:16 AM

Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. It brings back memories of childhood. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Michael Jordan

November 8, 2008 at 9:13 AM

Barbara - I enjoyed your Senryu it reminds me of my Sister and I growing up, God that seems so long ago now. God Bless, Michael

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