Irresistible Delight

Irresistible Delight Crooked garden gate Two naughty children swinging Run, mothers coming

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2012 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2012 4:22:00 PM

barbra, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD

James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2009 4:02:00 PM

Lovely write to two impish children>>James

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/9/2008 3:58:00 AM

HA! Yup, mama, the joykiller - that's me! lol great visual here, love Kristin

Deneen White

Date: 11/8/2008 5:27:00 PM

kids can cause such mischief, a smile inspired of this write, take care D-ncye

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/8/2008 3:28:00 PM

Irresistible indeed. I thought garden gates were made for children to swing on - I still swing on them now! Love, Nigel

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/8/2008 2:27:00 PM

I can see them swinging away having the time of there life. This is so well done. My mind drifted off to another place with this piece.

Date: 11/8/2008 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. It brings back memories of childhood. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/8/2008 9:13:00 AM

Barbara - I enjoyed your Senryu it reminds me of my Sister and I growing up, God that seems so long ago now. God Bless, Michael