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Irreplaceable Love

I grip onto your hand and plead with you to stay Always knowing that this would happen one day You snatch your hand from me and storm out of the door Leaving me sitting in a broken heap on the floor Painful, hot tears stream out of my eyes As our Happily Ever After slowly fades and dies You took everything with you when you left me all alone Hurting you is a sin from which I never can atone So you leaving now is the price I have to pay My mind racing as I think of what to say As your love is something I can never replace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/7/2018 9:11:00 PM
Well done, Andrea.
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Andrea Storrier
Date: 2/11/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/11/2017 8:22:00 AM
Such a heartbreaking poem, it really touch my heart and I really love reading it, good luck with your future poems and yeah I also have similar poems and I ll really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and let me know how they are
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Andrea Storrier
Date: 12/11/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, will definitely have at look at your poems and I’m sure I will really enjoy them x
Date: 12/4/2017 6:22:00 PM
Nicely written...All the best Andrea
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Andrea Storrier
Date: 12/6/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you

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