Irony, My Dearest Love

Was strolling down on Lover's Lane
With you lingering next to me.
Aphasiacs told me your name,
My love forever: Irony.

Your eyes of polished solar hue,
Comparable to no degree...
And I would venerate them too
My love, if I could only see.

You love the seasons with acclaim,
Adore the sight of all the trees. 
But then of course, it starts to rain
An acid that erodes the leaves.

But I confirm my love will last;
You may possess me endlessly.
My passion, never will it pass
Away, or go missing from me.

Despite my greatest efforts though,
There is one thing I cannot change.
It is your name, my deer, my doe.
The irony of love, so strange.

My love for you has now been slain.
As I was strolling down I slowed,
The sign that once said "Lover’s Lane",
Actually reads "Memory Road".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 27, 2010 at 4:04 AM
Congratulations Gael, on having your poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
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January 25, 2010 at 7:48 PM
First-rately feature Gael. Congratulations, Sincerely, Moses
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January 25, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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January 24, 2010 at 4:40 PM
congrats on the featured poem, it is very ironic, job well done!!
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January 24, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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January 24, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Can't believe I missed this brilliant piece, Gael! I've missed reading your work, as I've been away these last couple of months! Hugs, my friend! Donna
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January 24, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week >> James
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January 24, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Gael. Love, Carol
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September 26, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Gael, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 5:30 PM
TERRIFIC! Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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March 10, 2009 at 7:49 PM
Wow! A lot of irony in the last two lines, Gael. Love the way you brought your expressions of love to a close. Carolyn
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March 5, 2009 at 6:16 AM
absolutely beautiful... love the images... though at the end of each verse it turned grey... like the acid rain that burned the leaves... very well written!! ~ Arany
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March 5, 2009 at 5:06 AM
This is so sweet Gael. Hopefully we all get to visit there sometimes.
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