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Iridescent Colours

Iridescent Colours




Winds whip, murkiness masks the blue,
Pearlescent clouds hurry,
Birds raise their pitch to suffused hue,
Whole scene appears blurry,


The coherent torrential flow,
Pellucids opaline,
Iridescent hues in rainbow,
Brewed to get perfect wine!






Written April 1st, 2015 
on theme 5- opaline
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
For nette's contest "Let me feel your lines"

Awarded 7th place win

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2015

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Sara Kendrick Date: 5/18/2015 12:14:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go with your winner..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/16/2015 12:17:00 AM Colorful in spite of the blurry scene first depicted! Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:06:00 AM Thnx Andrea my dear friend for ur continued support n visit wid words of appreciation!

Paul Callus Date: 5/15/2015 1:37:00 PM Enjoyable poem in which your iridescent colours and imagery play a main role, Upma. Congratulations on a lovely win. // paul Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:05:00 AM Thnx Paul! Appreciate ur kind visit n words always! Sorry had been busy for quite s'time n did not acknowledge!

Sandra Haight Date: 5/15/2015 7:07:00 AM Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:04:00 AM Thnx Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/14/2015 9:01:00 PM Some wonderful phrases, congrats. ! BG Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:03:00 AM Thnx Barbara for ur wishes! Appreciate ur visit to my page!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/14/2015 7:42:00 PM Dr Upma:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:02:00 AM Thnx for ur ever kind support Linda!

Jan Allison Date: 5/14/2015 6:03:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:02:00 AM Thnx jan!

Skat A Date: 5/14/2015 5:22:00 PM Dr Upma, congratulations on your win. SKAT Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/17/2015 1:01:00 AM Thnx for ur wishes n kind words Skat my sweet friend!

Emile Pinet Date: 4/1/2015 9:48:00 AM Your poetic wit wraps itself around your words and we are entertained and awed by the experience. Emile. Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 9:54:00 AM Thnx Emile! Appreciate ur visit!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/1/2015 8:38:00 AM A beautiful verse, Dr. Upma...check your syllable count on your last two lines. I'm getting 7 - 5 instead of 8 - 6. Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 8:51:00 AM Thanks Rhonda! Appreciate ur kind visit and efforts! Fixed!

Asma Memon Date: 4/1/2015 7:27:00 AM It's insightful Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 8:52:00 AM Thnx Asma!

Constance La France Date: 4/1/2015 6:48:00 AM Upma, your verse is very beautiful, I love the words and lines, best of luck in the contest, A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 6:49:00 AM Thnx a lot BW! Appreciate ur words!

Jan Allison Date: 4/1/2015 4:34:00 AM such beautiful imagery - good luck in the contest - I have a black opal I adore the rainbow colours Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 6:51:00 AM Sorry Jan the comment for Leon landed up here ! Thnx for ur kind visit ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 4:40:00 AM Thnx Leon my dear poet ! Appreciate ur kind visit ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 4:39:00 AM Thnx Leon my dear poet ! Appreciate ur kind visit ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 4:39:00 AM Thanks a lot jan!

Leon Enriquez Date: 4/1/2015 4:27:00 AM Dear Dr Upma: Nicely done. I can certainly feel the splurge of colours and the vibrant rise and fall of the mood swing. Leon Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/1/2015 6:50:00 AM Thnx a lot Leon ! Comment meant for u landed up there with Jan!