Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Verse

Iridescent Colours

Iridescent Colours




Winds whip, murkiness masks the blue,
Pearlescent clouds hurry,
Birds raise their pitch to suffused hue,
Whole scene appears blurry,


The coherent torrential flow,
Pellucids opaline,
Iridescent hues in rainbow,
Brewed to get perfect wine!






Written April 1st, 2015 
on theme 5- opaline
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
For nette's contest "Let me feel your lines"

Awarded 7th place win

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Sara Kendrick May 18, 2015 at 12:14 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go with your winner..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2015 at 12:17 AM Colorful in spite of the blurry scene first depicted! Congrats on your win. Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:06 AM Thnx Andrea my dear friend for ur continued support n visit wid words of appreciation!

Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 1:37 PM Enjoyable poem in which your iridescent colours and imagery play a main role, Upma. Congratulations on a lovely win. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:05 AM Thnx Paul! Appreciate ur kind visit n words always! Sorry had been busy for quite s'time n did not acknowledge!

Sandra Haight May 15, 2015 at 7:07 AM Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:04 AM Thnx Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2015 at 9:01 PM Some wonderful phrases, congrats. ! BG Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:03 AM Thnx Barbara for ur wishes! Appreciate ur visit to my page!

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2015 at 7:42 PM Dr Upma:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~ Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:02 AM Thnx for ur ever kind support Linda!

Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 6:03 PM Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:02 AM Thnx jan!

Skat A May 14, 2015 at 5:22 PM Dr Upma, congratulations on your win. SKAT Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2015 at 1:01 AM Thnx for ur wishes n kind words Skat my sweet friend!

Emile Pinet April 1, 2015 at 9:48 AM Your poetic wit wraps itself around your words and we are entertained and awed by the experience. Emile. Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 9:54 AM Thnx Emile! Appreciate ur visit!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 1, 2015 at 8:38 AM A beautiful verse, Dr. Upma...check your syllable count on your last two lines. I'm getting 7 - 5 instead of 8 - 6. Hugs, Rhonda Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 8:51 AM Thanks Rhonda! Appreciate ur kind visit and efforts! Fixed!

Asma Memon April 1, 2015 at 7:27 AM It's insightful Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 8:52 AM Thnx Asma!

Constance La France April 1, 2015 at 6:48 AM Upma, your verse is very beautiful, I love the words and lines, best of luck in the contest, A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 6:49 AM Thnx a lot BW! Appreciate ur words!

Jan Allison April 1, 2015 at 4:34 AM such beautiful imagery - good luck in the contest - I have a black opal I adore the rainbow colours Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 6:51 AM Sorry Jan the comment for Leon landed up here ! Thnx for ur kind visit ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 4:40 AM Thnx Leon my dear poet ! Appreciate ur kind visit ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 4:39 AM Thnx Leon my dear poet ! Appreciate ur kind visit ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 4:39 AM Thanks a lot jan!

Leon Enriquez April 1, 2015 at 4:27 AM Dear Dr Upma: Nicely done. I can certainly feel the splurge of colours and the vibrant rise and fall of the mood swing. Leon Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 6:50 AM Thnx a lot Leon ! Comment meant for u landed up there with Jan!